Comics in Collaboration with Lovense (Behind-scene) (Patreon)

*Behind the Scenes of the Lovense Collab Comic*

The comic went through a lot of changes from the original sketch to the final version. Initially, I planned a 4 page story (first sketch shown), but that idea was too long and took up too much space. To keep things tighter and more effective, I created a new plan with a shorter but still complete story.

Only the first page in the final version remains close to the original concept—with some visual improvements. The biggest changes were to pages 2 and 3:

In the first concept, what is now page 3 was originally page 2, but the scene felt too sudden. So, I added a new page 2 to build up the tension before the “fun” begins.

Page 3 was adjusted to better suit the Lovense product showcase and flow more naturally from the buildup.

Page 4 was added to wrap up the scene in a smoother, more satisfying way—since ending it at the original third page felt rushed.

The last scrapped sketch shows Bob asking Jimmy about buying toys during the Lovense discount event, but I removed it to keep things focused and streamlined.

In the end, the comic featuring Octoper and Zack was more than enough.Thank you so much for your patience and continued support!