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Seal 4.3

2010, November 22: Brockton Bay, NH, USA

Tutoring James netted me an awe-inspiring sum of… forty bucks… Truly, I was the embodiment of wealth and prosperity…

Sarcasm aside, it was refreshing to have someone who was willing to listen and didn’t brush me off like some kind of chore. I promised myself I’d put in the work for him.

As much as I wanted to jump right into alchemy practice after mom and Sierra fell asleep, I could not. This time, it was my own conscience that convicted me. I didn’t want to become a monster like so many researchers in Amestris. SAINT had acquired plenty of rats, even fed them and kept them in individual cages mass-produced through the fabricator, but it was ultimately my responsibility to treat them humanely. I didn’t doubt most of these would die, but that didn’t mean they ought to suffer needlessly.

Which was how I found myself riding across the Brockton skyline, completely invisible to the world below.

I was out to commit some larceny, but not for my own gain. I was after a chemical compound called xylazine hydrochloride, a commonly administered anesthetic used by vets and researchers. Thirteen milligrams per kilo of rat would be enough, which meant about four milligrams per rat since they seldom weighed more than .35 kilos. As far as reasons for theft went, research ethics and animal welfare seemed like pretty good ones, at least not one Amy could condemn out of hand.

To avoid fucking with vets, I even headed straight for the biggest pharmaceutical supplier in the city: Medline Pharmaceuticals. Not only did they supply hospitals and pharmacies, they also acted as the distribution arm for many varieties of animal medicine, which presumably included xylazine HCL. That they were the distribution arm of Medhall and their president just happened to be James Fliescher, also known as Krieg, made them a particularly guilt-free target.

This wasn’t a “Creed” job; I sure as hell hadn’t told Amy where I’d be tonight. Paradoxically, that meant I needed to bring more of my gear with me, not less. I didn’t want a reputation for theft so I had everything with me, from my invisibility shroud to the bug-box I’d made for Faultline, the Pledge Regalia, and of course, SAINT.

Finding Medline’s headquarters was as simple as a quick google search. I alighted on the roof and decloaked before calling SAINT to my side. He popped out of my helmet cam with an eager trill.

“SAINT?”

“Pory?”

“Please stop humming the Pink Panther theme song.”

“Pory…”

I leaned down from the roof and pointed out a security camera. “See that? I need you to go down and enter their security network. Disable all cameras then replay a loop of the footage so nothing seems amiss.”

“Gon.”

I waited atop the building for a few seconds before SAINT reconnected with my suit. I then skipped down to the rear entrance. It was secured with a mechanical lock so I deployed the Pledge Regalia. Information flooded my sensors as the seven cross-shaped amplifiers expanded around me, all easily visible to the naked eye.

They were the main reason I needed the cameras offline. Despite my best efforts, my invisibility module didn’t encompass most things away from my person. Keeping the tombstone-like regalia shrouded while it wasn’t deployed was the best I could manage.

The regalia let out a series of soft vibrations that pervaded through the door. By analyzing the way sound interacted with the air, it created a 3D model of the lock’s internal mechanisms. After that, I had the lock open in a matter of moments. I was no locksmith, but since I already knew the lock had six tumblers and I could see the internals in real time, I just replicated a raking pattern using compressed vibrations until all the pins slotted into place. No fingerprints, no signs of forceful entry.

I collapsed the Pledge Regalia and reactivated the cloaking function. I whispered into my internal mic, “I’m inside. You can drop the loop, SAINT.”

A helpful floorplan posted next to each elevator pointed out the records office. The locks here were more sophisticated, requiring an electronic pass to enter. Paradoxically, that made things simpler for me. Instead of busting out the Pledge Regalia again, I just had to slip a bug-box onto the lock and wait a few seconds as it ran through combinations on a proxy server.

From there, I had SAINT go through their files and locate the xylazine HCL. Apparently, Medhall didn’t directly manufacture it. Instead, it was one of the chemicals imported from out of town. I had SAINT fudge all records to indicate that the chemical had never been ordered in the first place. So long as SAINT followed the electronic trail to edit the logs on the other end, it’d hopefully be chalked up as a clerical error.

Having located what I wanted, I headed back out to a Medline supply depot before breaking into that one as well. Within two hours, I had enough anesthetic to drug the Pied Piper’s whole entourage.

I wasn’t done with my little outing however. Before I could start experimenting on rats, it’d help a great deal to know just what Mr. Azimi was sick with. If it was something like a slightly misshapen pacemaker or maybe a constricted aorta, fixing it should be relatively simple. But if it was something genetic with underlying causes that would resurface in a year or two no matter what I did, I feared only Amy could help him then.

That was why I snuck into Brockton Bay General Hospital at one in the morning, though “snuck” was a bit harsh for what I did. I just trailed a patient and used them to mask my entry into the ER. After that, going to the records room was just a matter of stropping into the stairwell.

“SAINT, go. We’re looking for a Hamza Azimi, late-thirties to mid-forties in age. Male. Iraqi,” I told him. While I sent him off, I headed back up the stairs and ducked into a supply cabinet to nick a syringe and a set of needles. I needed a way to administer the anesthetic after all and medical supplies hadn’t been big on my list of priorities during the Hillside Heist.

I returned home after my less than legal escapades. SAINT was off in the lab, drawing a transmutation circle for organic matter based on a picture I’d shown him. Circles were a lot easier to draw on MS Paint than by hand with chalk. He’d have the lab ready for me so I could hop right to it right after school.

All told, not a bad way to start the Thanksgiving week.

X

2010, November 23: Brockton Bay, NH, USA

I looked over the organic transmutation circle one more time. It looked rather different from inorganic transmutation, which in turn looked different from Roy Mustang’s gaseous transmutation.

The circle before me had been engraved by one of Big Rig’s construction drones into a sheet of metal with exacting precision. It consisted of a set of concentric pentagons and circles, with each circle formed by connecting the corners of each pentagon. This was the formula used by Marcoh and his associates in the creation of a philosopher’s stone, but could also be adjusted for healing and the like.

I put on my costume, I forgot to grab an apron, and pulled a rat from the cage. Now that I knew what was wrong with Mr. Azimi, I could work on my own control, slowly refining the process until I could reconstruct a heart.

Unfortunately, that meant I’d need to find rats with the same condition. Or, as it turned out, make rats with the same condition.

“I’m sorry,” I whispered as I sank the needle into the rat. It squeaked in distress for a moment but its protests quickly died out as the drug kicked in.

I laid it out on its back and shaved its belly fur so I could cut it open. Then, with a reluctant sigh, I reached in and grasped its heart between my fingers; it was about the size of my thumbnail. A part of me wanted to ask SAINT to do this instead, to give each rat crippling heart damage so I didn’t have to, but I couldn’t.

Equivalent. Exchange.

There was always a price to pay. In life. In alchemy. In the pursuit of knowledge. I wouldn’t feel right if I asked SAINT to do something I couldn’t.

The heart squelched in my fingers and I suppressed the desire to vomit.

“Right. Heart reconstruction alchemy: test one. Begin,” I stated clinically for the recorder.

I pressed my hand onto the metal sheet and channeled my aura into it. Unfortunately, Fullmetal Alchemist was frustratingly vague about the mechanics of alchemy and what about it made it a science as opposed to “sorcery with chalk.” Yes, it was the manipulation of tectonic energies, but how did a person use chalk outlines to access and shape that energy?

That vagueness also ended up my saving grace. I didn’t know if the chi Mei Chang talked about was at all like aura from Pokemon, or if my power simply decided they were one and the same so I could use it, but I had no trouble catalyzing the alchemical circle.

My aura flowed into the circle and reached out, connecting with something below, a massive pool of energy born of the planet. It was indescribable. A part of me expected it to feel like roiling magma, or maybe the immense grinding force of tectonic plates. It was dense and heavy, warm, with the promise of unstoppable violence lying beneath the surface.

I tugged upward, drawing it out like one might water from a well. Tectonic energy filled the circle, flowing through the markings as if they were irrigation channels and I was watering a farm. In a way, I was. There was an expense, a price to pay in the form of energy. The rat wasn’t magically getting better.

I marveled as the rat’s heart slowly reformed. Tiny muscle fibers that looked like bits of string came together again. The heart inflated like a balloon and, for a moment, I thought I’d succeeded.

I could officially add “bumbling alchemist”  to my admittedly pitiful list of accomplishments!

And then the rat exploded. It was as fascinating as it was revolting just how much fluid was in a single rat.

I sighed. On the plus side, I had a power washer I made using a soda engine way back when I first sluiced out the hold to use as my lab. Cleaning wouldn’t be any more complicated than the first time. On the down side, I had rat intestine splattered on my helmet.

X

2010, November 25: Brockton Bay, NH, USA

I let out a dejected sigh as Lily #... I lost count… died on the operating table. I had the day to myself before I had to attend Thanksgiving dinner, not that that was a hardship.

I didn’t know how many rats I’d gone through, but I did know SAINT had restocked the holding cages more than once. For my own sanity, I chose not to confirm the numbers. Even in grad school, dissections were the absolute least favorite part of my curriculum, and what ultimately convinced me to switch from the surgical track to pediatrics. Kids didn’t usually need slicing open, and if they did, they were the problems of someone far better paid than I was.

Despite my distaste, I’d made a lot of progress. For starters, my rats weren’t exploding into meat confetti anymore. I’d gotten to the point where the rat would survive for a time, only for its heartbeat to progressively weaken and expire.

I wasn’t entirely sure what it was. I’d narrowed things down to some sort of chemical imbalance as opposed to mechanical error. The formula was right; the heart was physically perfect. My understanding of anatomy and physiology was, frankly, a hell of a lot better than Edward Elric’s, arguably better than Marcoh’s too. Maybe I was missing something, a signal that reminded the brain’s systems, “Hey, you have a heart again. You can stop shutting down now.”

For only a few days of work, I was mostly satisfied with how far I’d come. Because the formula was already verified to work, and because I could throw in medical knowledge from my past life and Google, operation of the circle was an exercise in control and focused imagination as much as it was technical know-how. Which was likely why I needed to actually practice this rather than simply build a single model and be done with it.

I picked up the rat carcass and tossed it into the trash to dispose of later. The bay was great for that. The phone rang so I wiped down the circle, what I’d been calling a transmutation slab, and checked the caller ID: Amy, which meant this could be good or bad.

I tapped the voice modulator in my helmet and answered the phone with a blubbering sob. “P-Please, I have the money… Just let him go!”

Amy’s nose scrunched up in confusion before she barked out a laugh. “Ha! Alright, I needed that. What’re you up to right now?”

“Dumping a body into the bay. How’s turkey day going?”

“Sure you are. I’m getting ready to head to the hospital. Was home. Vicky’s going to be here in a few minutes to ferry me there.”

“I thought you skipped major holidays?”

“I do, just not this time. Check the news, alright? I think Creed might need to make an appearance.”

I frowned. She’d only called me to act once, but if she thought it was worth me moving… “Is that an order, oh mighty GOAT?”

I could see the worry on her face. Whatever this mess was, she thought it could get bigger. “No, not yet. I just… It’s complicated and I want to talk about it after, okay? Keep a line open for me?”

“I always do.”

“Yeah, later.”

“Later.”

Curious now, I had SAINT pull up the local news on my HUD. A burly man in a fitted suit stood outside what could have been a small apartment building, or perhaps a scaled down office space that doubled as a storage depot that was common in the Docks. Whatever it used to be, it was all rubble now. A cordon had been set surrounding the disaster. I could spy six patrol cars and four ambulances. More were arriving as the reporter spoke into the camera.

“-ht, Hookwolf raided what has now been confirmed to be an ABB brothel. This attack was met by Oni Lee and the two capes engaged in an explosive battle across the street, completely demolishing the brothel and killing more than a dozen people by the most current count. This is the latest in a string of gang violence between the two biggest gangs in the city.

“What’s worrying is that this is a clear escalation from their usual posturing and occasional firefight. So far, every conflict has been incidental as two parties met on the street. This is the first time in months that one gang actively struck out against one of the other gang’s affiliated establishments.”

I frowned. That certainly explained why Amy was called back to the hospital. The body count seemed low too; brothels weren’t exactly known for having alert defenders. I couldn’t imagine the ABB would sit still after this, they’d lose way too much face for that, which meant I could expect more violence, maybe even Lung stepping up himself, exactly what I was supposed to stop. Amy wasn’t stupid; this was probably what she meant when she said Creed might have to make an appearance.

Question was, why? Why did Hookwolf hit a brothel of all places? What did he gain out of it? Money? No amount of loot he could have gotten would have been worthwhile. Women? No, Hookwolf wasn’t the type as far as I knew. He sure as hell wasn’t doing it for the sake of women’s rights.

I thought back to the things that had been happening so far. Did… Did Hookwolf think the ABB were responsible for hitting his dogfighting rings? Surely not… He had to know about Bitch; her lizard-rhino-dogs weren't exactly subtle.

But… But it’d be good enough to use as justification anyway… I knew little about Bradley Meadows as a man, but he was ultimately someone who lived for the fight. He truly enjoyed the violence, enough to consider the Slaughterhouse viable employment. Paper-thin as it was, I didn’t think Hookwolf needed much of a reason.

I tried to insert myself into Kaiser’s shoes. I imagined that I had a battle-hungry lieutenant who could potentially act out if left unsatisfied. I imagined that said lieutenant had his holdings attacked, something he took as a personal insult. I imagined that his men would think the same, that Bitch’s actions were a direct callout against the Empire.

As far as the Empire was concerned, they weren’t the ones who escalated. Whether the Undersiders were working with the ABB or not was irrelevant. By harboring them in their territory, the ABB made themselves targets.

I could see Hookwolf’s twisted reasoning and I hated it.

“Porygon. Pory,” SAINT trilled. He opened up the Brockton Bay PHO, often as reliable a news source as any traditional media.

I ignored the wasteland that was the cape-fic section and moved on to the news. And there it was, blowing up at the top of the thread, someone with footage of the cape fight. I watched as Hookwolf made zero pretense as to his purpose in the brothel, charging in mid-transformation. There was a lot of noise, more screaming than I was wholly comfortable with, and not enough people fleeing.

Then, almost a minute later, Oni Lee appeared, grenades already primed. The fight was mostly off-screen, Sergeant_Cricket had enough sense not to go into the fucking brothel with a murder-blender and a teleporting terrorist.

Whatever happened in there, the building didn’t last long after that. But what caught my eye was another thread, one that had nothing to do with the ABB.

♦ Topic: Guys? I'm afraid of the dark.In: Boards ► United States ► New England ► Brockton BayMaking_Orphans (Original Poster)Posted On Nov 25th 2010:So... To add yet another to the pile of reasons to consider moving, [this] is going on outside my house. I heard gunshots in a building across the street. When I looked outside, that giant column of smoke covered everything. The smoke's been getting larger and wider and I can't see the building anymore because it now covers a good third of the block.

You'll also notice the eerie silence... I don't know if that worries me more or less.Anyone have a clue what the fuck's going on? Preferably while my sanity's intact please?

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►Cock_My_DoodleReplied On Nov 25th 2010:Cape shit. Cape shit is going on.

►Making_Orphans (Original Poster)Replied On Nov 25th 2010:No shit, fuck-nugget. Anyone with something to contribute? Because shit's seriously freaking me out.[Smoke] is spreading. It's getting close to my apartment and I'm not sure if I should evacuate or hole up.

►White Fairy (Veteran Member)Replied On Nov 25th 2010:Personally? The silence would creep the hell out of me too. For the record though, you're probably not in much danger, at least not from the smoke. The only smoke-using cape in the city is Grue of the Undersiders. They’re a gang of petty thieves that started out in July.

[Here's] his wiki page for reference. Keep low and avoid the windows and you should be fine.

►Making_Orphans (Original Poster)Replied On Nov 25th 2010:General shooter protocols, got it. Thanks, Fairy. Good to know I'm not going to get gassed to death in bed or something. Still, what the fuck are the Undersiders doing near my house?

►AcreeReplied On Nov 25th 2010:Dunno, where is it?

►Making_Orphans (Original Poster)Replied On Nov 25th 2010:Bayview Drive, near Coral Cove Park if you know it. Sorry, but I don't really want to list my specific address on the internet.

►AcreeReplied On Nov 25th 2010:Understandable, sir. Do you know who the Undersiders are fighting? They've been fairly low-key in terms of violence so far.

►Making_Orphans (Original Poster)Replied On Nov 25th 2010:I mean, this is technically Empire territory? Kind of the outskirts though so I can keep my head down and be left alone for the most part. But come on, there's no way they'd fight the Empire, right? They're not Lung.

►White Fairy (Veteran Member)Replied On Nov 25th 2010:Who says they had a choice?

►Making_Orphans (Original Poster)Replied On Nov 25th 2010:Shit... I'm going to pretend I saw nothing.

►White Fairy (Veteran Member)Replied On Nov 25th 2010:You do that. Stay safe, Orphan.

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I let that sink in. The only reason I could think of for the Undersiders to be in Empire territory right this moment was that Coils was using Hookwolf’s own raid as a distraction to get the Undersiders a clean score. Was it a dogfighting ring again? Or maybe a drug distribution point? Firearms? I didn’t know, but it didn’t really matter in the end. They were intentionally fanning the flames.

I was reminded that reputation was a double-edged sword. I’d been using Kaiser’s reputation against him while stoking my own as a mercenary rogue. Now, that same reputation forced me to act or I’d be labeled a paper tiger.

I waffled on what I should do. No matter what I told Amy, I wasn’t a precog; I didn’t actually have all the answers. When forced to confront situations like this, I had nothing to draw on save for my own questionable intelligence.

In the end, I tabled the subject and headed home. If nothing else, I could expect a call from Amy, today if she wasn’t burnt out after the hospital and tomorrow if she decided to head straight to bed. We’d go over our options then and perhaps putting our heads together would give us a solution.

This night ended with more questions than answers. Just about the only upside to Thursday was that I’d programmed the fabricator to make me sets of throwing knives and had begun to read into the Xing Empire’s notes on alkahestry to augment my experiments. It was cold comfort not knowing what might be going on in the background.

X

2010, November 26: Brockton Bay, NH, USA

As I’d thought, Amy didn’t call last night, likely exhausted from running damage control. I took a shower, grabbed a Pop-Tart for breakfast, and threw a banana into my backpack before heading out to the lab for the day. On the way, I opened up my phone and browsed through the PHO threads I’d followed the night prior.

Nothing from Amy, but I had two private messages, one from Faultline and another from the GiverofGifts. Naturally, I checked out what Faultline had to say first.

Creed,

I’m sure you’ve heard the ruckus tonight. I’m also sure you’re aware of how I feel about getting involved in this city’s affairs. Please keep that in mind and know that I do not enjoy being used as a messenger by the ABB.

Yes, the ABB. No, it’s not your fault in the strictest sense, but I would appreciate it if you made some other means of contacting you available. You have a PHO account, but your inbox has been full to bursting since your debut and you have already built a reputation as being nearly unreachable save to capes who catch your interest.

As neither Lung nor Oni Lee have accounts, one of their unpowered lieutenants felt that using me to pass on a message to you directly would be the fastest way to catch your attention.

In short, Lung would like to inform you that he has placed a bounty on the Undersiders. He would like them brought to him alive so he can make an example of them for their actions. He will offer $30,000 per member. Should that be infeasible, he is also willing to pay a consulting fee of $10,000 for the location of their hideout should The GOAT be capable of discerning such. He also promises favors, protection, and future prospects.

I don’t have to tell you what will happen to them should they be taken to him.

I admit I am somewhat grateful to you as without your presence as an independent mercenary, Lung may have seen fit to press me to act. I would not have regardless, but your presence saves me the inconvenience. Still, you have taken it upon yourself to be the keeper of the balance of power within this city. Now you must make a choice.

On another note, I too would like to speak with you concerning The GOAT. Rest assured my query is independent of the current chaos in the city. I would appreciate an introduction with your enigmatic sponsor and would be willing to pay a consulting fee for the chance.

If you don’t see this until tomorrow morning, call me back in the afternoon; I’ll be awake by then.

Regards,

Faultline

PS: Labyrinth really enjoys her shawl and would like to say thank you again. The bug boxes and expanded bags have likewise made our jobs much easier.

I hummed in thought as I continued walking. On one hand, that Lung of all people reached out to me through Faultline implied he took my claim seriously. Or at least, he didn’t want to deal with whatever nuisance I’d cause for him if I decided to attack on top of the Empire. Considering the lack of capes loyal to him, this wasn’t entirely unexpected.

On the other hand, Faultline was clearly annoyed with me. She had warned me against being too flashy and felt I’d bitten off more than I could chew. It wasn’t even strictly about my ability to fight either; as she’d made clear in her letter, interfering here would mean influencing the lives of the Undersiders, maybe to cut them drastically short.

Then there was her final note. She wanted to meet The GOAT?

For the briefest moment, I considered giving Amy a voice modulator and setting her up on a phone call with Faultline. Then I stabbed the idea to death and buried it in the furthest reaches of my mind. Letting the two meet could only end in disaster.

Or, they might actually get along and decide they both needed to keep a leash on me.

I wasn’t sure what possibility scared me more.

Still, I did respect Faultline a fair bit. She’d been the one who first guided me as a cape. She dealt with me in good faith when she held all the cards. I felt I owed it to her to answer.

At the very least, it was easy enough to tell what she wanted. She only really cared about one thing, finding the truth behind Case-53s. I supposed she could be reaching out for some thinker help on an upcoming job out of the city, but seeing how The GOAT’s exact powers were a mystery, that was unlikely.

On paper, it was a noble thing, what she was doing. She wanted to find answers for her friends, the family she’d adopted. Problem was, I couldn’t give them to her. I knew where Case-53s came from. I knew who was responsible. And if I told them, that information would get them all killed.

I’d have to lie to her as The GOAT for her own good.

I skimmed the second message I received, this one from the GiverofGifts. She was Othala, I’d verified that back in September. Seeing how it was already compromised, it made sense that the Empire would use the account to contact me.

The details differed slightly, but the proposal was in more or less the same vein as Lung’s. Krieg, who’d adopted Othala’s account for the purpose, called the Undersiders “instigators” and “disruptors of the balance.” He then offered $45,000 per head, alive or dead, as well as facilities and resources for my cooperation, claiming that working together was the fastest way to return things to the status quo.

As if their help wouldn’t come with a noose around my neck.

No, neither path was right, morally or for my own continued security. With the beginnings of a plan going through my mind, I set myself to work.

Author’s Note

You know, I still have no idea what to call whatever the fuck the Pledge Regalia does. Is it still “sonar” if it lets the user view the internals of the human body and complex machinery like an x-ray machine?

I decided that any fantasy energy source is going to be compatible with aura from Pokemon. Bleach’s reiryoku? Fine. Naruto’s chakra? Great. Dragon Ball’s ki? Super (heh). I don’t care because keeping track of half a dozen different “mana pools” is silly. That also means Bryce’s control exercises and constant sparring against SAINT helps out immensely, even if that wasn’t my motive for consolidating it all.

Comments

Wrathkal

Both sides are definitely trying to kill two birds with one stone: get the Undersiders for causing them to come into conflict with each other, and to learn more about Creed's abilities in order to gain better advantage in future encounters. Power-wise, this was interesting to see... initial attempts at alkahestry/alchemy prove to be unsuccessful since his power seems to only give him knowledge and not practical skill... on the other hand, I hope to see him try doing some of the more elemental transmuting too, because being able to alter the surroundings is just too useful.

Zerak

I will repeat what I said during the interlude, he can point Faultline into the direction she would have taken in canon but around half a year earlier. Point her at Shamrock. As for the Pledge Regalia, I would call that thing a Sonic Screwdriver. Or if you ain’t a Doctor Who fan, just call what it does sonic resonance scan, sounds sciency enough. For what to do with the current situation, my personal opinion is fuck the unwritten rules. You don’t get to choose when they should apply to you. I think the only person in the Bay that actually follows them is Faultline. Coil knows almost everyone’s identity (and the undersiders also count in this), New Wave attacked a dude in his own home, empire did the same thing. ABB gives no shit about any rule as seen with Bakuda (granted that isn’t standard operating procedure). The PRT went after Taylor at school. So again fuck the “unwritten rules”, if they were important they would be written. If Coil wants to fuck around, let him find out. Hit him where it really hurts. He wants to play puppeteer, well he can fuck him over in multiple ways. He can outright just air out Coil’s civilian identity, and it wouldn’t really be breaking the unwritten rules since the fucker has access to the identities of other capes via his power and access in the PRT. He can attack Coil via exposing his relation with the Undersiders (who most members didn’t know they worked for), and also if he can release info on some of the people Coil hires being pedo’s and Coil provides them with alternate payment. This would be a big hit to coil since he would be under the spotlight and it’s no longer some random teens attacking, it’s an enemy gang attacking and while the undersiders are mobile, Coil’s men aren’t. He can even go scorched earth and release the location of Coil’s base and the fact that he has bombs in it rigged to blow the city and new asshole. Doing this will also get the PRT on his ass. And both gangs will be able to vent without looking weak. Also he can and should release the information on Coil’s power. It is one of the few things knows about The GOAT, that they know how people’s powers work. Just this will reduce the freedom he has as most major players will make sure things are secure enough that sensitive info can’t be gained from throw away timelines easily. Any of these routes could spell the end of the Undersiders as a team (as in they disband). Brian would not want to work with pedo’s and would distance himself. Alec would skip town if there is too much heat (remember the team hasn’t been together for long yet), and Rachel would flake if given a better opportunity for her dogs, Creed could send Dragon a message on her history and Dragon being the cinnamon roll she is would try to help her to the extent of the law (even if nothing comes of it, Bryce loses nothing). The chaos would provide enough opportunity for Sarah/Lisa to leave the city, and if she doesn’t and is set on screwing over Coil, we’ll that’s on her. The reason every faction wants of piece of Creed right now isn’t his power or his tech, it’s the info he has. So the best way to deter people is to use that info rather than just brute force things. He already showed he can be a big club, now it’s time to show that getting a beating isn’t the worst outcome of crossing his bottom line.

ArtHunt

Honestly, was wondering when you would have Bryce have his next fight. Shards are supposed to make their users seek conflict, and Bryce has just said no to this drive. Only other person I know who did that was Amy and that did not end well for her. Hopefully you will focus more on fighting in the future, so far the only story that really had any fights besides in the intro was the legendary tinker and that's been stuck in interlude hell for an eternity now.

ArtHunt

I don't know how much I agree with releasing Coils identity, but releasing Coils powers is a definite no brainer. It actually has been annoying me that Bryce hasn't done it yet, it doesn't violate any of the unwritten rules, including the soft ones during endbringer attacks. It would be a clear, don't fuck with me, to post Coils powers online, would keep Creed looking neutral, and scare the other gangs into behaving again out of fear of the Goat's wealth of Knowledge. It probably would also get more people to try and take out coil of their own imitative because no one wants a threat like that in their backyard, Marquis is proof of that. Coil himself has broken the unwritten rules several times before and while Bryce can't prove this, he should definitely take action. Like I know Bryce doesn't care too much for others, he has the whole “if it will happen it will mentality”, but he has to know Coil will use his family against him if he discovers his identity. And while Tatle isn't an oracle, given enough time she will figure him out. Feels like the author is purposely drawing things out to put Bryce in the worst possible position and only then allowing him to take action.

ArtHunt

Having Bryce fight more will keep the story interesting and force Bryce to tinker less, which will be nice because unless Fabled plans to keep dragging out chapters Bryce will probably become unstoppable before the year is over if he is allowed to tinker in peace like this. Bryce only has had his powers for a few months and already he feels powerful enough to take care of the Bay gangs, so unless you plan to put him in a coma like Andy, you need to have Bryce spend more time on stuff that's not tinkering, otherwise he will just kill Scion himself in a year.

Zerak

Fun fact about information, if you provide multiple piece of proven information and one unverifiable one people will assume it’s true, specially if it suits them. So he doesn’t need to explain shit. Also he doesn’t need to release his identity if he doesn’t want to, he can use TC to refer to Coil as a warning.

Wizz

Wait a second, I'm kinda confused right here. Did Faultline just decided to outright sell Creed to Coil? is she trying to see if The GOAT is worth keeping them close and not giving Coil ideas, or did she decide to give some trust to Creed even though he's been acting a bit out of line recently?

Darth Bayes

Well, I suppose Creed _could_ make both sides a counteroffer for information and sell them info on Coil, painting the Undersiders as mercenaries?

Fabled Webs

Ultimately, Faultline is a pragmatist. She's not good. She's not evil. She's loyal to her team and that loyalty dictates her primary objective: to find a cure for C-53s. She's going to do whatever gets her closer to this end (until she gets slapped by Contessa). The GOAT represents a unique opportunity in that regard. They are, as far as she knows, a powerful thinker who can enhance tinkers. There is a possibility that this level of analysis extends to other powers, maybe even C-53s. She's interested in learning more about The GOAT. She also thinks Creed's actions in the city have been foolish. Not because he lacks power, but because it's just a ton of work to be the arbiter of a city's gangs and Creed doesn't gain any tangible benefit from it. He holds no territory. He can acquire wealth and favors through other means. From her perspective as a mercenary, he's being a busybody because he... wants to...? Or because The GOAT asked? That's unclear to her, but she gets the inkling that he's more heroic than mercenary. Creed is a valuable resource, her sole connection to The GOAT, an ally and potential backup in the city, and a friend to Newter. What that means going forward, you'll have to wait.

ArtHunt

I like the idea but it feels hard to do in practice. Most combat alchemies have fatal flaws or are so weak they aren't worth learning. Mustang's alchemy really manipulates oxygen and relies on him creating a spark, but this is bad because if anyone else does this they might cause Bryce to preemptively create a fire, it also doesn't work when raining. I guess saint could make it deadlier considering saint could create better trajectories for Bryce to follow when creating a path of high oxygen density, but even then Fire just seems like a dangerous ability to have, and not something Bryce should keep if he wants to avoid killing his enemies. Water alchemy has a similar problem in the sense you are really manipulating temperature so using it on a person could be deadly, although I suppose Bryce could focus on the ice portion of it. Explosion alchemy from Kimblee has a similar problem as mentioned before, The Armstrong alchemy would be really cool considering that one lets Bryce terraform his environment. It sounds simple in theory and works well with Bryce’s skates if he swaps punching the ground for kicking the ground. Even if Bryce decides to not use it offensively, it's a good ability for him to have if he wants to say create a road of earth to skate up to get up a building faster, or create a few pillars of earth to support a house. Lyra’s alchemy basically condenses air and makes big blasts of wind, which is a good ability for bryce as it’s good for non lethal crowd control.

Wizz

Alright thanks for the explanation. I'll say I'm interested to see how this relationship would evolve with time, just as much as Amy really. The possibility of seeing them become... you could say better, or at least improve and not be stuck by the grimderp rule Wildbow imposed in the Worm universe is always something I like to read.

ArtHunt

Bryce could also just capture the Undersiders. As kids they probably wouldn't get tried too hard, and would simply be forced into the wards like Sophia. It would also take out Coils main distraction team and force him to start moving outside of the shadows. Bryce has no real reason to keep the team, and it would be interesting to see Taylor in a new team for once.

Zerak

There is the whole Human Human: model {insert case 53’s name here} idea he was planing on working on. And he is closer to achieving a weakness free fruit now with alchemy (not there yet), but even without it a lot of Case 53’s would take the fruit. You mentioned that he is afraid of drawing in Cauldron, but that won’t be as big an issue with the right build as he now has his resources acquisition tech tree. Plus he always has the “oh fuck, oh fuck, we are all going to die” back up option of turning Nilbog’s little kingdom into a philosopher’s stone.

ArtHunt

I think Bryce can solve a lot of the problems plaguing worm with what he has on hand if he actually acts. The problem is that to do so Bryce is gonna have to work with Cauldron and I don't think Fabled wants to bring Contessa into the story so early like in LT. Now that I think about it Bryce could probably have solved Hamza's heart issues just by having Saint move him up in priority on Amy's list. It seems like a simple fix and considering the speed she goes through patients, probably wouldn't be noticed.

Euth

It has been awhile since I read the earlier chapters, but when did Creed publicly take responsibility for keeping the peace? In his public fight back in Wave, I thought he made it clear his intervention to save the civilians and stop the fighting was a one time thing. Did he post something on PHO I have forgotten about? Just looking for context on why even the villains and Faultline think Creed must act. I have to go on a flight next week, maybe I'll re-read this story when I do to refresh my memory. The creation of the GOAT is simultaneously one of the smartest things Bryce did and the dumbest. It has helped keep the PRT off his back, but keeps Amy on it. Sometimes I wonder how this story would have gone if Bryce hadn't gone to the dance with Amy and thus hadn't outed himself to her. Any solution that doesn't deal with Coil is just kicking the can down the road. If Bryce doesn't act against Coil in person, the minimum he should do is reveal Coil's power and that he controls the Undersiders. It'd be funny if he described how Coil is wrong about his power, how his alternate timelines are actually just simulations. That would really freak Coil out. A big part of the appeal of Tinker of Fiction is watching the protagonist's growth while seeing the technology from popular fictions come together. Fabled is doing a tricky balancing act allowing Bryce to improve with each new specialty, but not become too powerful too quickly.

Robert H.

Creed set himself up as a moderater during that three-way-fight with the merchants when he debuted.

Fabled Webs

You're right, he didn't. He never outright went up on PHO saying "Anyone who starts something is going to get smacked down by me." If he did, people would probably think of him more heroically. However, he also never clarified that his intervention was a one time thing either. All he said was that The GOAT had him help civilians. When he was speaking to Militia, he said: [Miss Militia frowned, clearly displeased by this development. "You were fighting the Merchants until ten seconds ago." "I was. And now I am not fighting them," I said matter-of-factly. "Tell me honestly, heroes. If you capture them right now, can you prevent a gang war between the ABB and Empire over the vacuum left by the Merchants? Sure, they're the least of the gangs, but they're not nothing. Well?" I received sullen silence in response. "I thought not. The simple truth is that you are not ready to handle a gang war and I will not let you start one so you can feel good about a momentary feather in your cap."] This conversation following the fight became somewhat well-known because Creed explicitly allowed both Merchants and Empire to walk free, establishing himself as not-a-hero and giving people an idea of why he does what he does. So no, he never said it, but if his goal is to avoid a gang war, it's not something that can be done just once and left alone. Funnily enough, Lisa corrects Brian when he asks her what their boss is planning in the interlude: ["He wants to start a gang war because… because Creed said he'd come down on any instigators?" "He didn't say that. He said he'd keep the balance, which isn't quite the same thing. But basically, yes. He wants Creed to act. I'm guessing because he wants to know more about his new abilities. Guy's been building, fast."] Except, Lisa herself has drawn some conclusions about what Creed desires even though he's never said he wants to keep the balance either. This time, accurately. She's not the only one who drew this kind of conclusion obviously, and we saw a bit of it immediately following the fight. The older crowd, especially people who remember the "bad old days," would rather take this uneasy balance over open fighting. The younger crowd called Creed a coward. Bryce had a chat with Dean briefly about it in his civilian life. I have to admit, looking back on it, it's not something I handled well. I wanted to say it subtly, more of a statement Creed made with his actions instead of an open declaration (which would have otherwise been immediately challenged by the gangs), but I don't think I did that too well.

Fabled Webs

^See, that? That's the kind of thinking I'm too stupid to consider. I thought about a lot of different angles, thought about a plot thread I wanted to explore, then never looked back so it never entered my mind. Shhhh...

S33R

I mean Ultrasounds exist

Wrathkal

In this current case, the Empire and the ABB are facing an impending clash, primarily due to the Undersiders hitting one and hiding in the territory of the other. Their initial target has to strike back to preserve their reputation, but the act of striking back invites the other gang to retaliate as well. In order for Creed to live up to his debut declaration, he would have to do something to preserve the peace, and the obvious option is to hit the Undersiders, thus both gangs are trying to get him to do so in their name and hopefully tie him closer to their respective sides. Assuming he does go after them, I'm curious as to how they will react to learn that they are being used as throwaways...

JE OP

I think, like some others have said, he should use this opportunity to deal with Coil, tell the gangs that he is forcing the Undersiders to act against them, his powers and that he has an underground Bond villain base rigged to explode in the city, tell the nazis that he knows their identities and out his civ identity to them and coordinate to prevent the possible upheaval that follows (the PRT, the base, etc.)

Okita-Chan

A question I had: Could the Hito Hito no Mi cure Noelle?? Maybe Bryce could create a devil fruit based on Oliver. The missing part of her power.

Fabled Webs

Maybe? Case-53s are somewhat unique. The reason Panacea can't heal them isn't because she can't affect them (except Weld, he's different). It's because the Shard imposes that mutant form upon them. That new form is effectively the Shard's understanding of what a "healthy" human is (because the Shard is also a Frankenstein's monster patched together by Doctor Mother). Devil fruits do seem like they'd be able to ignore that, but as with other zoans, it wouldn't really be "fixing" them as it would be giving them a second "template" to overlay atop their mutant bodies. It'd be like having a second body they can toggle in and out of. BUT, it should be noted that Tony Tony Chopper, the closest analog in One Piece, does not have a human form. The Hito Hito gave him human-like intelligence, speech, and the ability to take a bipedal form. It did not make him human and doesn't seem to have that capability. As a doctor and New World-tier combatant, I would think Chopper's the one who understands the fruit best. If he doesn't have a human form, it's likely because he can't have one. So... What does that mean for, say, Newter? The Hito Hito is verified to give him intelligence (which he has), speech (which he has), and optional body modification (but not to the extent he'd want). I suppose it might let him control his power, maybe shorten his tail and give him muscle mass in exchange? But I don't know that it'd actually fix the problem. Noelle... I'm honestly not sure how to approach her. Jokes about the title of the story aside, I really don't have a plan regarding the Travelers. I'm always open to being convinced though if you think a Hito Hito made out of Oliver would somehow interface with Noelle's Shard. I see it as one part of the puzzle, rather than the instant solution people have been telling me it is.

Okita-Chan

It really depends on what you plan on doing with the artificial devil fruits. are they able to copy the powers of parahumans?? If yes, then giving a Model Oliver Fruit to Noelle should "fix" her power. Or rather give her the power she would have gotten if she drank the full vial. Her power could be like twice from Hero Academia. It would also be extremely funny if the Travelers just abandon Coil and Bryce is stuck with them. Another big change fixing Noelle would cause is that Leviathan might not attack Brockton Bay.

shukuen

Hello, just want to chime in regarding Chopper. His Heavy Point form is his Full Human transformation for the Hito Hito. This is evident in the pretimeskip as that form had no horns and the "fur" was more in line for a particularly hairy man. It was post timeskip that it took more inhuman appearance, but that was more because Chopper didn't bother keeping it purely human since he no longer had his hangups about being a "monster".

Okita-Chan

Chopper is a extremely unique case under Zoans, having so many forms. I think how they appear is more choice/how he needs them.