Jalter Doujin Page 4 (Patreon)

I really like this one (rare that i like that much a page i did) 

Please do not forget that it's still "wips" (99% finished) and the final doujin you'll see when i'll publish it publicly could have some majors fixs/improvements. If you want to suggest some better sentences or anything on the draw, feel free to suggest it (i'm really listening you)