Dagashi Doujin, Page 9 (Patreon)

WOW 7 TEXT BUBBLES ONLY ?! 

Idk what you think about it, but i feel like theres a strange feeling on my pages on this doujin... Theres a lot of variations between black, white and grey and i feel like it gives to the page(s) a feeling a bit too overloaded. I'll try to correct it when i'll finish all the pages and if it's still bother me, i don't know tbh.

Also have the 2 next page almost already finished, you'll see them tomorrow or next day c: