Proofreading time for Earth Fathers (Patreon)

I have shaken out 1600 garbage words (really, very, started to, clearly, going to) and I'm ready to start editing the actual story as opposed to using control-find to track down stupids.  So, would anyone like to jump on the Google drive and do some editing before I send it to Sue at the end of next week?  If so, drop the email you would like me to add to the Google doc into the comments