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Chapter Eighteen

Ama walked the room, her gaze taking it all in. “This is not what I expected from a mechanical room,” she said. The walls were the same pseudo-leather, but several pipes ran from the floor to the ceiling and humped control desks dominated the center of the room. And of course, off to the right was the alcove where Robins and his buddies had tried to use Tyce as spare parts. Tyce still had the probe tips in his brain to show for it.

The Command engineer, Baker, stood near the center control panel. Even though the man had gray hair and wrinkles, Tyce wanted to punch him in the nose. This was the moron who had sent Robins after Tyce. Left to his own devices, Robins probably still would have hatched a murder plot, but he wouldn’t have shoved Tyce head first into the ship if this engineer hadn’t told him it was necessary. 

John shoulder-bumped Tyce and spoke softly. “Stop glaring at my engineer.”

“You mean the one who tried to kill me when I was tied up?” Tyce asked. “And of course I was only tied up because I traded myself for two children who your guys wanted to experiment on.” Tyce spoke loud enough that everyone could hear. Some of the Command soldiers looked angry; others, shocked. Most just looked tired as they leaned against various surfaces. Ama watched silently. 

“We need to table this discussion until the Imshee are gone.” John said firmly.

“You can’t kill me,” Baker said in a high voice before he retreated behind a console. Then he realized that put him close to Ama, and he inched back. “I’m the only engineer.”

“We have many engineers,” Ama said. “They’ve tapped into water and protein lines and set up life support. We could live comfortably on this ship for many years based on the work of our engineers.” She smiled, but Baker lost most of the color out of his face. A sadistic thrill ran through Tyce. The asshole deserved all the copious amounts of shit Ama could dish out.

“Enough,” John said.  “Baker, have you found any defensive controls?”

For a second, he froze like a prey animal, then spluttered back to life. “I can’t! Everything routes through the broken circuits. Everything!” 

Tyce didn’t know what Baker meant until he gestured at the alcove. Up to this point, Yoss had leaned against the wall with his weapon resting against his shoulder, muzzle toward the ceiling. But now he brought it down, slapping the barrel into his left hand so fast that the sound startled people. “You try it and I’ll shoot you,” he warned.

A dozen Command weapons came up as soldiers targeted Yoss.

“Enough!” John yelled. He stepped right in front of Yoss. “Baker, find a tactical system or keep your head under those consoles.” 

“You can’t replace me.” His voice had an edge of desperation to it. Tyce wondered why he hadn’t taken off when Robins staged his coup. 

John moved closer to him. “Even if I asked the Dragon crew to send engineering help, I wouldn’t replace you,” John said more gently. “You and Chief Wu were our only engineers, but a ship this size would have dozens of them. Investigate a ship of this size would take hundreds of them.” He patted Baker’s arm. “Try to find any tactical system you can cobble together.”

“Chief Wu?” Ama asked.

“The other schmuck who landed in the alcove.” Tyce jerked his head toward the alcove. “He didn’t survive.”

“Ah.” Ama resumed her tour of the crowded room. Her proximity was making quite a few Command soldiers nervous, but she pretended to not notice. Some days Tyce didn’t understand her logic. 

“Commander?” the doctor kept his voice low, and his gaze kept darting back to the corner where the injured lay on foil blankets on the floor.

“Doctor Elkson?” 

The doctor moved closer. “We need supplies for the wounded. We’re out of plasma and blood replacement.” He looked over toward Tyce. “If the Ribelians can help...”

Earth liked everything sanitized—synthetic blood products rather than blood, sterilized gauze, disposable needles. Tyce had grown used to the rougher supplies on Ribelian ships, but he remembered his early horror. “We don’t have the sort of supplies you would likely prefer. We use person to person blood transfusions and fabric bandages,” Tyce warned. The doctor winced, but he nodded at the same time. He must be desperate to make that sort of compromise.

“Ama?” Tyce asked. She looked over at Yoss and jerked her head toward the door. His expression turned thunderous and for a second Tyce thought he might refuse the order. However, after a staring contest that lasted a good minute, he huffed and strode out of the room.

“Nice discipline,” Plat muttered.

Ama walked over to him and patted him on the shoulder. Plat looked horrified, but he was frozen in place. No doubt he was unsure about how to handle a slight, grandmotherly woman taking liberties. Ama had a face that made a person feel guilty about even considering punching her, even if her words were fucking weapons of mass destruction. “Families are different than armies,” Ama said. “No doubt your mother spent many hours repeating directions.”

That implied Ama was Yoss’s mother, which she wasn’t, but it also reinforced the idea that the Dragon was a family ship, so Tyce fully endorsed the lie. A flare of anger and fear rippled through Tyce with such power that he grabbed the edge of a console. 

Ama narrowed her eyes and started walking toward him when the deck lurched. The floor bucked up so hard that everyone was thrown a foot or two into the air before they landed. Tyce thanked God that the floor was padded because he landed hard enough to give his knees a jolt. One Command soldier fired his weapon, and the whine of the discharge had all the soldiers raising their weapons. 

Then the floor tilted so they scrambled to secure weapons as they slid across the floor. Tyce skidded into the concave curve of the nearest console and grabbed a young soldier who was about to slide past. The kid went wide-eyed at being so close to Tyce, but she didn’t say anything.

John clung to the side of another console. “Report!” The ship shivered and gravity lurched to one side so Tyce was nearly thrown clear of the console, but he grabbed the edge just as the soldier crashed into him. “Sorry,” she said as she clawed her way back to her side.

Baker said from some place behind and under Tyce’s console, “I don’t know!” Now he sounded panicked as well as petulant. 

“Anyone?” John asked calmly. 

“It felt like a hull breach,” Ama said. Tyce kept his grip on the console and carefully stood. The gravity was skewed so he half laid on the side of the console as he searched the room for her. She was in a corner with three Command soldiers, all of them jammed together, but thankfully the curve of the room meant that most of the crew seemed relatively unharmed.

John was staring at the corner. “Doctor?” he called. The worry in his voice reminded Tyce that John had men badly injured. The doctor didn’t answer, but one of the assistants wearing medical white said, “If the Ribelian ship can send supplies, we need them now.”

The gravity started to ship back toward normal, and Tyce scooted toward floor a half second before down became down again. A few soldiers who had not adjusted fast enough grunted, and one cursed as he landed on the floor with an ominous thud. “We’ll do our best,” Tyce said. Breaking protocol for a scatter alert, Tyce touched his radio. “Yoss?”

There was no answer. Either he was dead or he was better at obeying protocol than Tyce. Tyce looked over toward Ama since Yoss was more likely to listen to her. She touched her own radio and used the newly aligned gravity to join Tyce in the curve of the console. “Yoss, are you still breathing?”

A double click answered. He was fine, but he wasn’t going to broadcast his location to anyone listening. Tyce closed his eyes and sent the universe a prayer of gratitude. While Yoss was a pain in the ass, there wasn’t anyone on the ship that Tyce spent more time with. They loved each other as much as they hated each other.

Ama said, “People are hurting. Hurry if you can.” This time no clicks answered, but Tyce wouldn’t expect Yoss to risk a second signal. Ama pressed her fingertips together and spoke softly. “May all suffering quickly cease, and all joy be fulfilled.” The situation was well and truly fucked if Amali resorted to prayer instead of a weapon.

“Sir, we should send out patrols,” Plat said. “That may have been a new boarding party.”

“That was no boarding,” Ama said firmly. “When a ship boards, you get more of a shiver, but that…” She winced as thought a memory hurt her. “Thirty or so years ago, one of the ships I served on had a hull breech. That felt like a breech. The sudden loss of atmosphere throws the ship off its axis, but there is no explosive tremor through the ship’s infrastructure.” 

“Bone may not carry the vibration the same as metal infrastructure,” Baker said. That might be logical, but Ama had lived in space her whole life and knew more about spaceships—and aging spaceships—than twenty Command engineers. Tyce trusted her judgment.

Tyce asked, “How do we find the breech and are we at risk?” He felt a low-grade panic at the thought of the Dragon crew, isolated, spread out around the ship, at risk. Those were his people in a way no one else ever had been. He refused to lose any of them. And that feeling was ridiculous because he had already lost more than one in this damned war. And given the plan he had helped the rebel council design included the world’s slowest suicide plan, he would lose many more. He felt impossibly old and tired.

“That would depend on what caused the breech,” Ama said. “I don’t see a surveillance set up like in the other room.”

John had been talking to the injured. He knelt next to one, his fingers resting on the woman’s shoulder in a comforting gesture, but now he turned. “Surveillance? You found a surveillance system?”

“Behind one of the sphincter doors,” Ama confirmed.

John frowned, but it was Sergeant Plat who asked, “Behind what?”

Tyce explained. “It’s a retractable door with the mechanism hidden in the designs on the walls. That’s how I got out of the room where you put me. There was a door on the back wall that led to a stair.”

John covered his face with his hand, and several other soldiers started muttering. One of the women who had been forced into the corner with Ama slapped the wall and let out a creative string of curses. She was the most vocal, but not the only soldier who appeared angry. Tyce wasn’t sure what had inspired that reaction. Hidden doors were a tactical annoyance, but not the ground-shaking shift in reality these soldiers seemed to treat it as. “What?” 

Plat answered. “The soldiers who took off with Robins said that Commander Burden had freed you. They said he was a sympathizer and they refused to listen to him anymore.”

“Oh.” Tyce wasn’t sure what to say. He refused to feel guilty about escaping, but a little part of him whispered that he should. His actions had undermined John’s authority. Tyce looked over at John, but he gave a small shake of his head. If John had the ability to read minds, Tyce would think that he was forgiving Tyce.

Specialist Wiles said, “Commander, I apologize. I searched that room top to bottom. I can’t believe I didn’t find a door.” He looked horrified at having let John down. Maybe Robins and his crew hadn’t trusted John, but the disrespect was not universal.

“The door is designed to blend into the wall decorations,” Tyce said even though he would have ripped a member of the Dragon crew if they’d made the same mistake. He changed the topic rather than examine his own feelings. “How are your injured people?” 

“Not good,” John said softly. “We need supplies and we need to get eyes on the enemy. If one of those monsters gets in here…”

Tyce could follow that logic easily enough, but tactically he didn’t have a solution. If the aliens wanted this room, logic dictated that they had to hold this room. This was the ground worth fighting over. However, the wounded needed a more secure position. But if they split their forces, they wouldn’t have the firepower to protect either—not with Command personnel. The obvious solution was to call in Dragon crew, but that would leave the Dragon’s vulnerable population isolated and stuck in shuttles that couldn’t detach. This felt like one of the ridiculously difficult tactical simulations from the academy.

He looked at Ama. “We could call up Bravo.” They were the standard boarding party, so there was a chance Command would have intelligence on them or even photographs, but they had the most experience fighting through enemy territory. And Joahan had been a merchanteer before joining the rebels, so he would understand Command mindset better than the Ribelian members of the crew. 

She slowly nodded. “I agree. We will survive or die together. I would rather we survive. Captain Robinson, give the order,” she said before she inclined her head toward him, giving him the leadership position back again. Tyce gritted his teeth. He didn’t want to give the orders that would send people to their deaths, but he couldn’t deny that he had more tactical experience. She touched her radio. “Elephant with Garuda.” With that simple command, the weight of the mission was, once again, on Tyce shoulders.

“Bravo to Elephant Seven,” Tyce ordered. Bravo team would move steadily toward Ama, using her radio as a beacon. She turned her beacon on. The Command soldiers shifted nervously, reacting to the Ribelian codes on a visceral level, even if they knew the Imshee was a bigger threat.

“I called Bravo team in to help defend the position. Yoss will get the supplies here as quickly as possible, but none of my people are going to rush into an area. It will take time for any of them to get here.”

Dr. Elkson spoke up. “If they take too much, some of these people may not survive. That gravity shift tore open wounds.”

The guilt and pain of that tore at Tyce, but he couldn’t change reality or order his people to rush into danger. “We’re all doing our best, Doctor.”

“Yes,” John said. “We are. The only one to blame for this situation is the Imshee.  If they’ve breeched the hull, they may be trying to destroy the ship instead of taking her. We need to find the enemy, and to do that, we need that surveillance room you found.” He stood a little straighter and looked around the room. Command soldiers stood straighter as his gaze passed over them. “These Imshee think we’re easy prey. They may be able to beat the Rownt with their big-ass ships, but those turtles are slow and cautious. Everyone in this room survived because we took risks no Rownt would have.” John turned to Tyce. “We need to get to that surveillance room and get eyes on the Imshee and on any hull breech.”

John nodded. “Agreed. But we can’t fight our way through an Imshee.”

“What do you suggest?” John sounded curious—optimistic even.

Tyce smiled. “Those creatures don’t have good traction. They slip and slide, and the curves and stairs around this place favor us. I think two or three of us should run for the surveillance room.”

“That’s insane,” someone blurted.

“And crazy enough to work,” John said.

“I’m going,” Tyce said before Ama could volunteer. He was younger and faster, and hopefully he would get another gut reaction if something was coming at them. He might not like putting his faith in a feeling he couldn’t identify, but so far the ship had steered him right every time. Ama pressed her lips together in a thin line, but she didn’t protest.

“Sir,” Plat said loudly just as John opened his mouth. “I volunteer to go with him. I have top scores on obstacle running.”

Until Plat made his offer, Tyce hadn’t realized that he had been hoping that John would come. It had been a ridiculous hope. Of course the Command crew wouldn’t let the only officer go wandering around with a fugitive Ribelian. John nodded, and Tyce’s small hope that he could talk to his friend man-to-man died. This was a mission to get intelligence and nothing else.

“Come on, rebel-rat,” Plat said in a teasing tone as he headed for the door. Tyce desperately wished he had Yoss or John at his back, but he followed Plat.


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Is it clear that we've just met the angry (and scared) ship, or do I need to beef up that section right before the hull breech?

Comments

Blue

catches, "Investigate a ship of this size would take hundreds of them.” - investigating

Blue

“No doubt your mother spent many hours repeating directions.” - this is not a catch. This is me appreciating Ama's perfect sassy putdown. I like Ama. And I like this story, sorry, I have to comment the catches as I read them through the first time as I read them or I lose them and I worry it comes across a bit abrupt. And in answer to your question it wasn't clear to me that the ship was angry so maybe you do need to beef it up abit. Although now I am wildly speculating that the hull breech was the ship dispelling Imshee from a section. (Did I mention it's really late here and I'm tired so maybe I'm not at my most logical)

Blue

“If the Ribelian ship can send supplies, we need them now.” - the Ribelian's don't have a ship anymore, so I would say "If the Ribelians can send supplies", but then again I can see that this command medical officer might still be thinking in terms of the ship that they were chasing, so I don't know if this is a catch or not.

Jennifer

I was also confused about the ship being angry. When I first read this paragraph "That implied Ama was Yoss’s mother, which she wasn’t, but it also reinforced the idea that the Dragon was a family ship, so Tyce fully endorsed the lie. A flare of anger and fear rippled through Tyce with such power that he grabbed the edge of a console. " I thought the ship was angry because of the lie or something because it was in the same paragraph.

Mandy Lancaster

I think it needs to be beefed up a bit. Since we're only getting the ship's reactions through Tyce they have to be big strokes to make it through that filter. The beef the Imshee have with the ship and the Command crew but not the Dragon crew is still unclear as well. I adore Ama, she just sails through these murky waters without a visible ripple. Her compassion and toughness compliment each other perfectly. I love Tyce accidently uncovering the reason for the mutiny. Of course, this is better than if the mutineers had gone in to kill Tyce and he'd stabbed them with the knife John gave him. :) I think Blue got everything but here are my catches: And of course, off to the right -- And, of Investigate a ship of this size would take hundreds of them.” -- Investigaing a ship “Sorry,” she said as she clawed her way back to her side. -- her side is unclear, the Command side? his side? The gravity started to ship back toward normal, -- to shift back She winced as thought a memory hurt -- as though “I called Bravo team in to help defend the position. -- defend this position.

KR

I realized the ship was angry, but not why.

Alyssa Underwood

Got the angry part, but not the scared part. Also, don’t know the why either...

Nanette kerrison

Enjoying the story. Got the emotion from the ship through Tyce, but while reading, couldn’t plug it into anything.

Anna Alien

I didn’t really get that the ship was angry or scared sorry. I wasn’t entirely clear what were Tyce’s human empathy about the situation and what was the ship transmitting through him. So beef it up please, so that more clueless readers like me can get it. I’d like it to be made absolutely clear that these emotions do not come from Tyce himself.

Corinna Cox

I picked up it was the ship but maybe a little less subtle.

Corinna Cox

John turned to Tyce. “We need to get to that surveillance room and get eyes on the Imshee and on any hull breech.” John nodded. “Agreed. But we can’t fight our way through an Imshee.” “What do you suggest?” John sounded curious—optimistic even. This section is a little confusing, maybe it’s me, but shouldn’t it be Tyce nodding not John? I’m not completely sure which one is saying what.

Lyn Gala

Don't worry about that. I appreciate those sorts of catches in any form. I also appreciate the feedback on the ship's anger. How is this for an edit?

Lyn Gala

That's an excellent point about the paragraph breaks. Those two events are unrelated, so I put them in separate paragraphs. Here's the new version: That implied Ama was Yoss’s mother, which she wasn’t, but it also reinforced the idea that the Dragon was a family ship, so Tyce fully endorsed the lie. Out of nowhere, a flare of anger and fear rippled through Tyce with such power that he grabbed the edge of a console. He had an overwhelming urge to kill, to slaughter, to fucking rip the enemy apart. Ama narrowed her eyes and started walking toward him. Tyce tried to tell her to stay back, that he couldn’t control his emotions, but then the deck lurched.

Lyn Gala

I struggle sometimes when I'm trying to find the line between hint and obvious, so I appreciate the help sorting it out. I've changed the passage now: That implied Ama was Yoss’s mother, which she wasn’t, but it also reinforced the idea that the Dragon was a family ship, so Tyce fully endorsed the lie. Out of nowhere, a flare of anger and fear rippled through Tyce with such power that he grabbed the edge of a console. He had an overwhelming urge to kill, to slaughter, to fucking rip the enemy apart. Ama narrowed her eyes and started walking toward him. Tyce tried to tell her to stay back, that he couldn’t control his emotions, but then the deck lurched.

Lyn Gala

I haven't dropped hints about why, but I definitely need to beef up the fear. Thank you for that feedback.

Lyn Gala

That's good to know. I haven't dropped hints for the reason yet, that's next chapter, but I am beefing up the emotion a bit.

Lyn Gala

Several people have said that the emotion was unclear, so I am (hopefully) making that a lot clearer. This is the new section: That implied Ama was Yoss’s mother, which she wasn’t, but it also reinforced the idea that the Dragon was a family ship, so Tyce fully endorsed the lie. Out of nowhere, a flare of anger and fear rippled through Tyce with such power that he grabbed the edge of a console. He had an overwhelming urge to kill, to slaughter, to fucking rip the enemy apart. Ama narrowed her eyes and started walking toward him. Tyce tried to tell her to stay back, that he couldn’t control his emotions, but then the deck lurched.

Lyn Gala

Yeah, I can see where I went wrong, so I've added quite a bit to that section: That implied Ama was Yoss’s mother, which she wasn’t, but it also reinforced the idea that the Dragon was a family ship, so Tyce fully endorsed the lie. Out of nowhere, a flare of anger and fear rippled through Tyce with such power that he grabbed the edge of a console. He had an overwhelming urge to kill, to slaughter, to fucking rip the enemy apart. Ama narrowed her eyes and started walking toward him. Tyce tried to tell her to stay back, that he couldn’t control his emotions, but then the deck lurched.

Lyn Gala

Thank you so much. It helps so much to have another set of eyes on the text. That was Tyce nodding.