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This is for Raelin who asked for the one where Rownt get custody of an orphan. I ended up with several orphans, and I didn't focus on the Rownt, but it's in the neighborhood.  Fair warning, my mom has gone in the hospital again (the doctors assure me that she needs time and medical help for her lung function but she's not in immediate danger). I can't quite find my happy muse. I might revisit this snippet and give it a part two when I'm in a better mood.


  

“This is the Earth ship Violet requesting assistance. Rownt ship, please respond.” Alison coughed hard enough to send blood splatters across the screen. “Please,” she whispered without triggering the transmit button. She knew Rownt lacked any sort of altruism, but she had one last card to play. “Rownt ship, we had a radiation leak and we have children on board. We need assistance.” 

Alison waited. The radio remained silent. Seeing another ship on her sensors was a torture almost greater than the radiation poisoning. The door opened behind her, but she didn’t turn. She prayed he would go back to the nursery once he’d seen she was still alive. She hoped in vain.

“Anything?” Chad asked as he sat in the secondary communication seat.

“Nothing,” she said. A wave of dizziness slammed into her and she grabbed the edge of the control panel. Chad was there at her side, his hand under her elbow to keep her from falling over. “Don’t,” she snapped. Her body was radioactive, and Chad was too young to survive much exposure. As it was, he shouldn’t be out of the most heavily shielded area.

“I’m not going to let you fall over.”

“Sooner or later you’re going to have to.” Alison blinked away tears. Her vision was always blurry now. “If I get too sick, keep hailing them, once every hour. Add new information each time—the number of children, the number of dead on the ship, the rad levels on the engine breach—anything. Just keep them interested.”

“If they aren’t going to save us, why bother?” Chad asked. “We’re just going to die anyway.”

“You tell them that,” Alison said. “You tell them that the children here are going to die.” She started coughing. She couldn’t stop the spams this time, and she barely turned to the side before dull blobs of blood came up. 

“Alison!” Chad tried to reach her, but she reached out a trembling arm to hold him back. The closer he got, the more radiation he was absorbing. He was only twelve. It would take a fraction of the radiation to kill him as it would an adult. Even now he was probably doomed to die of cancer, even if the Rownt did take him off this flying coffin.

Chad went around to the other side, and Alison turned the back of her chair toward him to keep him from trying to offer her some pointless comfort. Then she heard him.

“If you’re not monsters, you have to come save Alison. She’s the only one left. I don’t know how to help her. You have to come!” He started crying. Alison didn’t even know if he’d managed to trigger the communication switch, but she hoped so. The manual said the Rownt protected children, and if so, she hoped they suffered guilt for the rest of their freakishly long lives for leaving these children to die. Alison knew she would. She wouldn’t live long with that regret, but she still felt the pain of it.

A computer-generated voice came over the radio. “Young one. Are no other adults present?”

“Just Alison,” Chad said. “All the others are younger. You have to come save Alison. She’s coughing up blood, just like the others did before they died. You have to save her. You have to.”

The manual also said Rownt respected logic, and that was the least logical argument Alison had ever heard, but she didn’t have the breath to tell him that. Her vision grayed as she struggled to get air through the blood in her lungs. It was surreal, hearing the death rattle in her own lungs. In the last week, she had lived with the sound, woken to the sound, fallen asleep to it. It had grown fainter as her crewmates had died one by one, but now the rattle filled her ears. She could tell Chad was still talking to the other ship, but the words were lost as she lost her grip on consciousness.

Maybe it was the pointless hope of a dying woman, but she imagined relief in Chad’s voice. She pretended that meant the Rownt would come for the children. She pretended that she had saved the children in the end. It was a last, ridiculous hope she indulged in as she closed her eyes for the last time. 

Comments

Angelica Santana

This storyline seems amazing and not only made you feel so many emotions but I am not sure what happens next.

Mandy Lancaster

Well that was heart wrenching. The Rownt would respect Alison's devotion to the children, so, while I doubt they can save her they would honor her last request. What a terrible situation and so well told. I hope your mom has a very speedy and complete recovery.

CappaRed

Wow okay. Now I'll just go feel all the things why don't I?

Evelyn St.

Hope you mum will get better fast, so all the best for her and hugs to you. And what a great snippet! You do that all the time, you hit me right between the eyes (this time more right IN the eye, started crying here) and it doesn‘t matter if it‘s a long or a short story. I would love to read how it ends, pretty please!

Nanette kerrison

sucked right in! Looking forward to meeting more people in this universe.

Zizawah

I hope your mom is going to be OK! Please hang in there!

Ingeborg Aune

Best wishes to your mum! Thank you for posting this, though I really do hope there is a part two. Hugs!

Rachel

This is great! It will be interesting to see if the Rownt give the kids back to Earth or if they get integrated onto the ship.

Lyn Gala

I not completely sure either, but I do know it will feature a very confused group of Rownt

Lyn Gala

The Rownt would totally respect Alison’s determination to save the children. An adult dying at her station trying to save them would appeal to their instincts, Mom is home now and feeling better, but she is back on oxygen, we’re getting there.

Lyn Gala

She's home now and she'll be on oxygen for a while, but one step at a time. And I'm kinda (not) sorry about making you cry. I was in that sort of mood.

Lyn Gala

Thank you. She's home now and resting. And I think I may come back to this one.

Lyn Gala

I'm honestly not sure what they're going to do, other than very quietly panic when they realize they know nothing about human children.

Tarody

I'm sorry you are going through such a difficult time. I hope your mother recovers well. I loved this snippet and really hope to see more. I would imagine they would contact the grandmother with a human patelia and we would see Zach again!