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So, first question.  How is “Dakota Dromos” working in the latest story?

Second, what do you think of “Dakota Dromos’s Magical Quest” as a title? Does it give a Harry Potter vibe?

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Moux

Hmmm it does sound a little like a title for a picture book in my opinion - a little too childish maybe? I can't really think of an alternative though so I'm not very helpful in that side 😅 Though tbh I've never been a big fan of "main character name" + "does thing"

Jean Reads

ok, i have read chapter 3. How about "The Merlin Challenge" as a title or part of the title? It's not generic. And it is shorter than "The Quest for Merlin's Sword". The name Merlin will imply fantasy to anyone who see it (except maybe for junior bird enthusiasts). And you may also attract readers (or parents/grandparents of young readers) who were fans of another popular YA British fantasy author, Diana Wynne Jones. (FYI, I loved her books, but she had a bit of a fat-child phobia that I didn't recognize until I was older). She wrote a book called The Merlin Conspiracy.