The Pleasures of Hell - Chapter 036 (Patreon)

Yeesh, book 3 is getting into the action faster than the other books, for sure.

I bought myself a couple self-editing guide books lately. I did 8 years ago, and read them thoroughly at the time, but it's been so long I figure it's time for an update and see if I can catch and undo bad habits. Hopefully you'll notice my writing coming across as a little leaner, meaner, and cleaner.

Next chapter coming November 5th.

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T1+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/poh-simplified-90310253

T2+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/in-depth-89961163