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The Pleasures of Hell - Chapter 054 (Patreon)

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2025-05-29 16:39:29
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2026-06
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Here we go. These sorts of chapters get ridiculously complicated.

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T1+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/poh-simplified-90310253

T2+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/in-depth-89961163

Comments

Sunny

Holy moly! What a fantastic chapter

Dan Kronjin

Wow wow wow. Wow. I didn’t’ know I could read so quickly. Had me hooked from first page to last. Great chapter!

Imation

An amazing action packed chapter. A battle with the angels, a battle with the Angel of Death and a battle with the alien. Talk about complicated. I admire that you even are able to insert a dialog between the characters that further the bigger story of PoH. The conversations with Saar Moriah and Ezekiel but also with the rest of the company, Jes, Laoka, Timaeus and the Las . Even Dao gets her clicking storm. Not to forget the insightful comments: Thank God , soul not unmarked and Azalia knew about the alien invader. This chapter concentrated on day 79 in the afterlife of David works very well. However I kept asking myself, what does Mia experience and think about this? (just teasing)

DMW_MD

It always seems to finish too fast, this was a very good chapter.

Tygre137

Chapeau, well done.

DealerDur

I love how you write battles. They always feel so real, it feels like im right in the middle of it.

AniNovu

Thanks. I really try to get into a storyteller mentality when writing them, to try and keep the flow going for all the events happening.

Daddy D

This goes into the archive of epic chapters!! I fucking love your stories, and it's chapters like this that bleed excellence, that are part of the overarching enjoyment.

Vuldrog

Fantastic chapter. I particularly liked the opening conversation with Saar. I feel like you nailed what kind of disposition a captain of Azoryev would have. He was reasonable, level-headed, and it seemed like he was personally sympathetic to David's plight. But when Moriah insulted his strength, he immediately squared up. The tension visibly ratcheted up as soon as she threw down the gauntlet. And there was no question that his loyalty to the Council is unerring — as surely every angel devout enough to be appointed captain must be. But as soon as he was confronted with the evidence of the invaders, Saar adapted, taking David's tactical information into stride. We got so much characterization about a pragmatic commander in just a few pages. Really good stuff. I want more smart but ruthless angels! I also enjoyed Ezekiel's reactions. The progression of his analysis of the situation was fittingly lightning-quick. From his rapid evaluation of David's story to the resigned realization that David must die to the immediate lunge towards Moriah, mwah *chef's kiss* We love a decisive reaper of death. I lol'd at the instant wave of death towards the invaders. And speaking of, I dig the mindflayer-esque flavor of the aliens. Tentacles, purple armor, telekinetic powers? Sign me up. Let's gobble some brains up!