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Daddy D

Great chapter!!

Imation

I think I saw a documentary about the Ants on NatGeo, they looked ominous. But well used in this story it suits David. And I almost saw Mia using her notebook to work on her psych homework. Well written quiet chapter building up for the storm. A tiny technicality: i think Noah uses a memory of Mia, the mother passing her hate to her son etc, and I'm not sure Mia would have shared it with him.

AniNovu

Thanks. I think Mia explained to everyone what happened last chapter, though I think I wrote it as a summary, so I glossed over it. "Mia explained everything" sorta line, somewhere in the last chapter.

Imation

I was in doubt. The memories are emotionally charged, on the one hand Mia is not afraid to share her feelings on the other hand would she share them with the group? I wouldn't and maybe that’s the answer.

Vuldrog

I don't know why, but the description of the massive ravine the party approached at the end of the chapter was particularly evocative. Something about this chapter really emphasized that the Scar is a wound inflicted on Hell. I like these hints that David is hardening to the task ahead of him, in the Scar and beyond. The last line of the chapter hits different after that little aside where David was seemingly tempted by the thought that he could wield the spire aura to command a host of demons. I hope we get the chance to see more of David's inner steel that Acelina referred to during the upcoming conflict. The way our protagonists are shaped by Hell as much as they shape it is one of my favorite parts of this story.