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Things happen! The ball is now officially rolling.

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Daddy D

Oh, holy shit!!! All I can say is... Thank you for doing the amazing work you do.

Im1lirable

Jesus fucking Crist, twist with Daoka, details of raider and action is incoming. You truly know, how to capture attention and make wait for more

DMW_MD

The next chapter is going to be a hard one to wait for. I'm very glad that you're more of a Brandon Sanderson than a George RR Martin.

Imation

The moral of this chapter: never skip morning sex. It could so easily have been the last time that David had fun with his girls. And the next few days David will have a head ache.

AniNovu

Thanks. I do enjoy writing fast. Don't even get me started on GRR Martin, that asshole.

Radioczar

I’m so glad I signed up to your Patreon. This is really worth it. Plus I have MLV to read in between POH drops.

AniNovu

Awesome, thanks. Though you'll definitely see I was still learning how to write with MLV.

Cuzzo5677

This was an a-fuckin-mazing chapter. Probably my favorite so far and that’s sayin a lot!! Keep up the wonderful work.

AniNovu

Thanks. Not really sure why so many people are liking this chapter so much compared to the others. :thinking:

Vuldrog

I'm sure there's a page on TVTropes that could put this better, but the rider fight scene felt unrealistically non-lethal. Every time the rider got close to killing a character, someone else tanked the aggro in the exact instant the rider would have finished them off. That's okay if it happens a few times, but you have to imagine that the rider would anticipate someone recklessly jumping at him to save their friend if it happens five times in one fight. So, unfortunately, whenever the rider raised his axe to finish someone off, I didn't feel any fear that the character would actually die. On the flip side, I did like that Noah and Yosepha didn't wait for the rider to fully form before attacking. A solid anti-trope moment. A big revelation that the rider is seeking his wife! Knowing at least that the rider is human, my mind went to Adam & Eve, their union being the first marriage. If that's right, the female rider taking a risk to help the unmarked echoes a little bit the act of original sin in that Eve is defying God by ignoring the Council's orders. And we're hit with another revelation that Daoka can speak and a lovely moment of solicitude from her. "She was covered in meera metal, a full set of armor that left little skin exposed, like a demon knight walking on all fours." Fucking sick. Love that image. Calls up to mind the Boreal Outrider Knight from Dark Souls 3.