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Dan Kronjin

Another excellent chapter! I found myself reading Azazel’s lines out loud, slowly in my deepest voice, with a slight lisp, to enhance the vibe.

Imation

If you keep writing chapters like this one I don’t want to see you speeding up at all; mind blowing, breath taking, bone chilling, heartbeat slowing, tension rising. This storry should go on for ever and ever.

Daddy D

Yes! Yes! Yes! Fan-fucking-tastic! As Dan and stillnoname said, you’re on point, my friend!

DMW_MD

A + chapter. I'll double down on my comment from the last chapter. Don't rush it. As much as I want the next chapter ASAP, whatever you're doing now is working really well.

AniNovu

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it. I'll make sure to slow it down if my brain breaks.

Mike Fuchs

Simple awesome story! I look forward to each chapter like it's Xmas.

Vuldrog

I appreciate how you continue to express the unmarked's power in relatable terms. I especially liked the simile of the oil vein. I am enjoying seeing David grow into a leader. It would be interesting to see him confronted with a situation, though, where he's not presented in the moral right. I mean, as we've recently learned, Hell exists as part of a fragile ecosystem. No one is clear on the details of whether suffering needs to exist, but in the absence of such evidence, David plows forward with a vision of Hell that is dramatically different than it seems like was intended. Should David try to reshape Hell? Does he have the ontological right to? David isn't particularly religious, but it feels incredibly arrogant for him to decide without question that human morality should apply to Hell. Especially after learning that God transformed Hell following Lucifer's rebellion. We're cleaving towards those age-old questions of fate vs. free will—I hope to see David & Mia acknowledge the magnitude of their situation when they consider whether to change Hell, even in the small ways, like saving imps or grems from predation.