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Yeesh, most lore-heavy chapter yet, I think.

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T1+ Bestiary: https://www.patreon.com/posts/poh-simplified-90310253

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DMW_MD

Most lore heavy indeed, and well worth it Though that cliff hanger is going to drive me nuts for a few weeks.

Daddy D

So, I've paused after Keziah's section so I can be back IRL and to let that sink in.... Holy smokes, dude, fantastic! I'll comment again when I finish, but, YES!

Daddy D

Alright, decided I could finish and totally worth it! I wish I was a wealthy, wealthy man, I'd be a benefactor to ensure you had the time and comfort to pump these out sooner. Alas, I'll await patiently and appreciate your time and efforts to craft these amazing stories.

Imation

It is almost to much to handle. Keziah with her memories of the First War, seen through a lens. As it goes with memories we only get fragments and we jump from one scene to the other. The attack from Lucifer, the support from the Old Ones and then the civil war in Heaven. Described in impressions distorted through a lens. The question who is Navameere? I don’t know how many chapters ago David had the same question at the time it just seemed a referee. And then the rebirth of Azoryev/Keziah there is so much to think about. The section with Mia is so intense that it almost deserves a separate chapter. What do I say this chapter deserves a book. You are an amazing writer.

Im1lirable

I'm playing catch-up, but that doesn't change how richly written the world is. It's a shame, of course, that my personal favorite, David, isn't getting all the attention and action right now. But that will make it all the sweeter when he shines again. Mia is still moving forward, and it looks like she'll soon meet bbeg. And keziah, chef's kiss.