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Book 6! Shit is about to go down. Soon (tm).

Chapters like this make me laugh. I'm trying to increase the pacing and cut down on the amount of filler in the prose, and I still come away with these long-winded chapters full of character development (and too many sentences that drag on or are redundant). But Book 6 is just starting, and will get utterly crazy, so I think a little character development is worth it.

The pacing and filler prose thing is an interesting conundrum. You wouldn't notice it as much if you read each chapter as they're released. You might even find the re-detailing and stuff useful. But for people who like to wait and then binge entire books at a time, it must read very slow. Let me know.

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DMW_MD

A solid start. Honestly, I kind of like the long winded chapters. Character development is pretty much always a good thing.

Imation

It can be tiresome. Having read 5 books in which David and Mia travel to the Forgotten Place and finally they are close. Bring on book 6. This chapter we learn that they still are in the same place. Only a good writer can make it interesting. I compare it with a chess game. After 5 gruesome hours the game is adjourned and the next day we resume. The table is cleaned, new sheets of paper, new pencils, fresh ashtrays. But before we start the pieces are dusted and the position is clarified. And then we have a new start. Mia working out how the unmarked ended up in Heaven and getting psychological advice by Adron about her fixation for broken boys. David finding out his mummy complex and releasing his pent up energy. Honestly I underestimated how much it bothered me and how much I would rejoice in the ministrations of the girls. Another wonderful chapter Sir.