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The story progresses! I indulge some stereotypes in this chapter that I can't help but love.


Last chapter included vote #18.

Comments

Chris

cliffhanger endings for a chapter usually are fine with me... It just means I don't stop until the book is done. With stories I get chapter by chapter it makes me wanna throw things. There are entirely too many times where you can throw us off the cliff. ; ;

Grimlakin

Great first Tefler with the cliffhangers now you! Just take my. Money and give us more chapters!!

AniNovu

I'm sorry. :( Problematically, chapters lend naturally to frequent cliffhangers. There's an up and down flow to chapters (start calm, end on tension, or start on tension, end calm), so to maintain quality narrative flow, cliffhangers happen almost spontaneously. I'd never end a book/part on a cliffhanger, but chapters? Can't be avoided. :(