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My Little Ventrue Pt.7 Ch.1 (Ch. 95) (Patreon)

Published:
2020-12-17 17:18:55
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2020-12-27 21:33:20
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2026-06
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Ah, finally. Been aching to write this scene.

One of my readers said they were able to predict which characters I write about in a chapter. True/False?


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Malcolm

I predict, Jack and Beatrice. But I’m shaky with this one since idk which plot threads will be picked up or started

Malcolm

Jack and Damien was my second choice. I’m going to keep on trying this, it’s fun, but with some predictable rules

Malcolm

I also don’t think we’ve seen Antoinette blissed out on sex before, and let me tell you it’s divine. Also, of course it’s fucking Jacob.

patrick__starz

I'm just wondering when Jack will go talk to Jacob about the Strix or if Jacob will confront Jack about the curse

AniNovu

I look forward to exploring interactions between Jack and other people, now that he's changed.

AniNovu

It surprises me how many people like Damien.

Alejandro Salas

You mean... Because you expect people not to like him? Most of your characters are very likeable. Because their motivations are 75-90% clear from the get go. 75% being people like Jacob. And the antagonists are very antagonistic. So it works out.

AniNovu

Some of the characters can be a bit... less relatable than others. Otrera in Medusa: Fate's Game annoyed a lot of readers for a long time, until much further into the series.

Rogue

Hope Elaine becomes Jack's Ventrue teacher like Luke's yoda. Shower thought is Elaine gender bent Julias (tall, blonde?).

Robert Collins

The scenes with Jack's mother don't really seem to be going well or anywhere helpful to the story. I've got to wonder if you wouldn't have been better off letting Jack's sister survive instead of his mother.

AniNovu

Give it time. I'm going somewhere with it. I can't guarantee you'll like where I'm going with it, but it is going somewhere!

Robert Collins

After I posted my comment, I got to thinking that it had to do with maturity. Jessy, Natasha, Damien, Jennifer and many of the main characters have shown less maturity than Jack, despite the number of years after they were embraced. Introducing a MILF to this group seems so out of place. Maybe that's what you have in mind. Jack's sister would have been just another young and potentially immature character.

Robert Collins

In any event, it does set up an unusual dynamic. If Jack reaches a crisis where he must choose between Antoinette, a much older (and wiser?) woman, and his mother, which way will he go? I'm assuming that the ultimate end of this story is Jack ends up as the new Prince. Perhaps that is why you have set up this dynamic.

Robert Collins

Here are some questions for a different direction then. Jack seems to look on his newly discovered "beast" as something different from what other Kindred have. Something acquired by a long distant sire from the past. If this is true, does he have another buried "beast" common to other kindred? If not, how is his different from any other kindred's "beast?" More importantly, where does the kindred's beast come from? Is it acquired from the sire like a disease germ that grows from a small infection into a full blown "beast?" If not, is a "beast" buried within all kine only to be awakened by the embracement of a sire? Answers perhaps Antoinette can answer or has already secretly answered through her research.

AniNovu

Some of those questions will be answered in the story, some will be mysteries, some are actually found in the source material (Vampire: the Requiem, the universe ruleset I used to create Dolareido and its characters).

MisterRex

The sex scenes between Jack and Antoinette always evoke a...unique blend of empathetic bliss and near-murderous envy. Jack’s certainly a lucky little Ventrue as far as his love life is concerned.

AniNovu

Definitely a guilty pleasure of mine. I'd be lying if I said it wasn't a big reason I started writing the series in the first place.