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Two sections in this chapter. I wasn't sure which to put first and which to put second, because they both happen at the same time. Let me know if you'd have prefer Part A to come after Part B, or if it was fine where it was. They're drastically different in tone, and I wasn't sure which to end a chapter on.




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MINOR SPOILERS:

Ok, after this, there's going to be a lull in the erotic content I think. A bunch of storylines and and threads are coming up, and fitting in tasty sex won't really work.

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John Smith

Good chapter. Bitter-sweet is the last page turn as per usual. I wonder if Suzanne was trying for resurrection herself and it was all for nothing, hence the maddened laughing atop the pile of corpses. To answer your question, Part B ends with more of a cliffhanger than Part A so I feel it flows better to leave as is.

AniNovu

That's good. It's not the order I wrote them in, ha. I switched Part A and B the day I uploaded the chapter.

R. Kener

Shakespeare redefined the Crone. Tolkien redefined the Elves. Pratchett redefined the Wizard, and the Crone... Novus Animus may redefine the Resurrection. (But that would provide an 'out-of-jail' card that would annihilate tension in stories; bad idea).

R. Kener

Part A and B might switch, anyway, now they are cast in canonical form :-)

AniNovu

I haaaaate when stories perform resurrection, and destroy narrative weight. I'm not saying it can't be done (or that I will/will not be doing it), but most stories really should just avoid it. Usually, I put resurrection on the same page as time travel and time loops: gimmicks used by hack writers.

R. Kener

Maybe in a parody...

AniNovu

Comedy and its derivatives are the one genre that get to break the rules. :)