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More things!

We're definitely not spending all of Part 8 in the Great Below, but it's serving as an intermediary step to build up to story threads I've already established. No worries, I'm not pulling more story threads out of my ass, with no intention of tying up old ones.

https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/finalfantasy/images/a/ab/Train_Graveyard_Wide_FFVIIR.jpg A scene view aid for this chapter!

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Adam B

Will we see more of the spirits in the future, e.g. Street-Tail King & Red Tide? Seems like there's still lots more to explore with the spirits. Also, noticed you wrote 'cost is clear', should be 'coast is clear'.

AniNovu

Good find, thanks. There's a lot to explore in MLV, and while I will touch and explain things, I don't plan to fully explain eeeeverything. More things, sure, but not everything. We'll definitely have more questions about spirits in Dolareido answered, though.

Rogue

I'm surprised Jack didn't start singing Ghostbusters.

Memoryleak

I hope you mean part 8 🙂. It doesn’t feel right Avery using the word “fellow”. First time I think you used it was out of Sam’s mouth and it fits her personality. You’ve had her say it a couple times at this point when talking about Jacob. Same with blasted when referring to Daniel. I can’t remember who else said it but it doesn’t feel right anyone other than Elaine saying it.

AniNovu

Woops, I did mean part 8. As for Avery, well I guess it depends on how you read her voice. She talks with some bite, but she's also quite old. I didn't think some older sounding words like fellow or blasted were out of her reach :thinking:

Memoryleak

I guess I associate fellow as something a sweet or folksy person would say and blasted with British. But I can see Avery using it due to her age.