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I could have turned this chapter into 3 chapters, but I really tried to speed along the events. I have a habit of dragging things on cause I get lost in the immediate descriptions. Let me know if the event flow reads smoothly, or is too jarring.

Bit of a delay on this chapter, but just because I wrote some things out of order. Next chapter is due on the 14th.

Also, I'm having some trouble with my Discord account, so I haven't been able to log in. Discord's trying to fix the issue, but until then, don't do anything crazy.

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Memoryleak

“Those are the sort of changes… “ I assume you meant chains. 🙂 Pace was good and no issues following. I assume you cut a Sabrina/Jessie conversation. That could have been fun, especially with how she can put her foot in her mouth at times.

AniNovu

Nice catch! And I had planned on an whole 'leaving the Great Below' section where people would get to talk, but decided to not, so I could get the ball rolling.

Memoryleak

It was the right choice. It has the same feel as part 6 chapter 14, which I think is your best chapter so far in terms of story telling. This one moves fast but flows very well.