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My Little Ventrue Pt.8 Ch.12 (Ch. 130) (Patreon)

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2022-01-06 21:24:34
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2026-06
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Finally, shit starts to happen. I definitely meandered too much with the middle of Part 8, but now we're on track.

A bit of the next chapter went onto the end of this chapter, so it's a bit longer while the next chapter will be a bit shorter.

Comments

Memoryleak

Ohh, so the split personality may not be Susanna but it could be her “relative” that she killed under the tree, interesting. Of course I could be way off🤷‍♂️. I agree this chapter is closer to what I expected during an early/mid part. One thing I noticed is that recently you have been clifhangering a lot of mid chapter perspectives. I don’t mind it at the end of a chapter but in this one in particular you left two, Jack and Nat.

AniNovu

With 6 PoVs, I can't avoid cliffhangers like that. I've tried and it makes for some weird pacing. My next series will only have 2 PoVs, so it should be far less an issue.

Memoryleak

Is Damien considered a right hand of the Invictus at this point with Maria as the leader of the Lancea?

AniNovu

Yes, he's still officially an Invictus. The Lancea et Sanctum aren't really 'alive' yet. Takes a long time to get a covenant going.

Memoryleak

Makes sense. I think it may have worked better if you ended Jack’s on the Jacob buddy slap and had his BB interaction for the next chapter, still ending this one with Tash getting staked. Granted this really only matters for the ones following the story as it is written. I envy those that will pick up this story once it is complete. If you had to do it again and narrow it down to 3, which 2 would you choose?(obviously Jack+2)

AniNovu

Jack, Triss, and Natasha, definitely. Triss for many reasons. Natasha would become Natasha + Eric, and basically be the primary source of all werewolf interactions. Also the story needs to have some erotic material female readers gravitate toward, and that's Tash.