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Emerson Fortier

Ah. Waking up earlier than the daily post is always so dissapointing. The coffee is much better with a chapters. Tftc!

SirWins

Still cringing at the romance.

SirWins

It would be interesting if the one who killed her mom was one of his parents.

Broseph

Really? I'm totally digging it.

SirWins

Hmm It’s mostly from past reading experiences. Early and fast paced romances just don’t play out well and there is always this feeling of unnaturalness to it.

Broseph

I look at it like it's an Austin Powers bit. Obviously it's a little bit idyllic (wtf, I can't believe I'm saying that about an OM novel!) but it's really fun to read nonethless.

Tock Blue

early days to tell. the time scale is the only thing that makes it a writing risk to me, but it's really well done within that framing; imo OM has done a great job making Weave/the umbrals and the relationship all feel fleshed out and meaningful without feeling "rushed." same with Adam and Valor. a disconnected MC would be less engaging