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Spiraling Silver and Eyes

By far the most erotic chapter you've written yet and it fills me with absolute and unyielding joy

Gaz

I could be wrong but I have a feeling 811 or 812 will do a rivalry/heel-face turn somewhere down the line. The character is far too interesting to just ignore

Tock Blue

think it's a pretty neat writing flex to turn "Nameless Orc Caravan Guard" into Memorable Antagonist With Agency and A Cohesive Identity with Narrative Hooks.

Ekko

“You’re system-sent gift, you know that? So many humans… they run from me. -> "You're a system-sent gift, you know that?...

Ekko

“Oh, you’re still coming. Still!” 811 looked like he was in love. “You can’t even imagine running away, can you?” “Not with you,” Shiv growled. “Not right now. Besides. I can’t beat the shit out of you without getting any closer.”  Is that a motherflipping JoJo reference! Hell Yeah!

Ekko

The "Oh dear" at the end there had me cackling. Beautiful fight scene, what am iconic Asshole of an Orc. The guy would be a cool friend, if he wasn't such a twisted, cruel Bastard. The City of Compact reminds me of the first Circle of Hell from "System Breaker"