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II-13 Affliction (Patreon)

Published:
2025-06-15 16:31:55
Edited:
2026-05-03 06:55:28
Imported:
2026-06
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[Removed per stubbing for Kindle Unlimited Release]

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EsZeus (edited)

Comment edits

2026-09-05 07:00 Ok, so basically 2 MCs. And you had to force Adam to keep pace with the First MC, because otherwise he would lack behind. You have one MC who cant die. His progress makes sense. But then you force this on a "normal" person, which lowers whatever the first MC Shiv did. So everything Shiv is doing now is worth less, because everyone can reach it "easily" like Adam does. Isn't this weird in itself? You rob the uniqueness of the MC with that. Yes he can still die. But he is not unique enough anymore, if the forced second MC us just keeping up with him DYING :) Bad idea, in my eyes. I am slightly disappointed currently. But let's see how it continues
2025-07-13 19:58

Tyler Thompson

Yeah Im done here. This plot has gone stupid. The whole orc thing is so stupid and convoluted to nerf the mc.

Ved

Adam has been told multiple times to be a prodigy of unmatched potential, and a son of Roland Arrow who is most likely a very special master Pathbearer at the cusp of legendary considering all the plotting around him. Adam not keeping up with Shiv wouldn’t make sense, especially now that Valor is invested in his growth too

Ved

Love the new plot line . Lone OP MC stories get repetitive after a while, especially the reincarnating ones for obvious reasons. I hope we see more of other people’s progression aside from shiv. Adam, Uva…

Singular

The time dilation of one book being over a period of what is written as 2 weeks…with shiv gaining adepts/master skills (multiple) in that SHORT amount of time as compared to the prodigy of Adam, who we don’t get to see train over what is likely years…and you believe that is overshadowing the 2week MC? I get it, but take a step back and compare the time indexing of each, and also allow for some struggle