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II-18 Jealousy (II) (Patreon)

Published:
2025-06-19 08:17:21
Edited:
2026-05-03 08:11:44
Imported:
2026-06
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[Removed per stubbing for Kindle Unlimited Release]

Comments

ShadowKnight

Not to be that guy because this was a very enjoyable novel so far but please don’t make this a reoccurring thing with him suddenly being an idiot, like he was simple but not a moron, it was funny and believable for the first and second times this happened but is it just is supposed to be funny the hundredth time? like there was another novel same exact thing, except with the Mc going back in time to when he got his powers and the nerf he got was being a “bull in a china shop” “supposedly” he absolutely cared for innocent people and abhorred slavery yet he ended up killing everyone he was “trying” to save and even close by cities with just collateral damage of his fighting …..sound familiar? Also if this turns into one of the sentient system kinda novels I’m just forgetting this like the other novel, it’s on RoyalRoad forgot the name cause I dropped that one but it was popular

nrcs1995

I’m not concerned- you’ve got this Mammal

Justin Mott

Biomancy in origin -> biomantic probably

EsZeus

Maybe he will take over the gate? Would be nice

EsZeus

happened in is gate -> this (not is)

benjamin tenyson

Well, you have a fair point but it isn't so easy to fight strong enemies without innocent people dying. Unlike Marvel, DC and most hero movies that most times don't show the casualties from monsters clashing, this is more realistic. Especially when your enemy knows you're trying to save people, that gives them an advantage. Though, I'm with you on him learning his mistakes during acting. I know he is still low leveled in it but at least he should be more careful of simple mistakes. Well, it briefly skipped my mind about him needing to wipe their memory off but I know that he isn't even skilled enough for that. So, there was no hope of him doing it in the first place. But him attacking the guard was just dumb. Can't say if there was a safer way of preventing the guard from beating the old man. Maybe he should have helped the man on time before the guard came. Anyways, sorry for not using paragraphs. Enter seems to be sending the message instead of going to the next line

Ekko

Well, he didn't attack the guy willingly. He reacted to safe the old man before he could make a concious choice. After that he panicked and used what he could. When people panic, they don't think things through. Shiv is very bad in deception in general and his first Impulse is to be honest. That makes him a good person, but also a shitty spy. He also doesn't have any training to fall back to, only what he learned till now. You can't forget, that it's only been two weeks for him on his Path and three/five days as a "spy". Two to three of which he was infested from Orc Madness. I think he is doing pretty good, all things considered