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Rayse

Uva puppeteered the biomancer dragon and made the chronomancer's body explode--its magic resistance was already exhausted by Shiv.

EsZeus

Weird back and forth

Boyo

I think I'm going to bow out here. Uva now has the most disgusting skill set I can imagine. Instead of the MC being horrified by his girlfriend being literallly everything he hates, he apparently doesnt care. You-as the author-are also working your ass off the keep the companion's power in line with Shiv; They are just picking up Heroic skills left and right. Shiv, despite a long laundry list of feats greatly eclipsing both Adam and Uva, has yet to pick up one. What on god's green earth does one need to do to earn a heroic skill in toughness, if Shiv didnt merit one. I think my problem is I am seeing your fingers manipulating the progression of your characters more and more, breaking me out of the immersion of the setting.