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Truck69kun

Huh. Marikos seems more than what meets the eye

Quyan640

Is Marikos going to help them?

Nathan moi

He's the greatest idiot who also got a Unique skill, that's why Shiv remind Valor of him and what's sets him apart from other dragons

chest25

"decide who I am,” Shiv said. “And I don’t want to be a bastard. I want to be a War Priest, just a coward that hurts the weak. I don’t want to be Roland who can’t seem" Missing a "don't" in there no?

benjamin tenyson

Okay, I'm getting tired of the 180⁰ Shiv has taken concerning people with the capability to manipulate mind. Feeling turned on because of the possibility? If that's my greatest weakness after beating death, no matter what romantic relationship I have with someone, they'll still be worrying because relationships don't necessarily last

Omezy

I paid to read ahead and the story is still fun but this Shiv being all of a sudden finding mind manipulation a massive turn on. When he was just so vehemently against it being used. Even if you respect the power and it’s against enemies the constant “this gets me horny” is throwing me off cause it really doesn’t make any sense. Plus this relationship is not even a year old.

OstensibleMammal

Received feedback. More than five people have mentioned this. Will be something I review.