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Nathan moi

Thanks for the chap, i do wonder if the team will ever patch their respective weaknesses. My guess would be yes but not until the system put them against each other so who knows how long this will take 🤔

Mark

In this chapter we are bumping up against the usual problem with OP character arcs for the first time in this story: 99% of adversaries are a joke now, basically nothing but Heroic and Legendary Pathbearers and various gods and god-like monsters are a challenge any more. I am not saying the story isn't still good, but I am curious how the author will deal with this going forward.

Nathan moi

That ain't true, Harkness (as a master) would still be a major problem to him if he was alone and if she had the drop on him (given his shit awareness, wouldn't be impossible). Then it would a race to see who is faster, shiv's chronomancy or her mind powers. If she was faster, she would just have to keep blending his mind while capturing him and not killing him. From then on she would just need some help to figure his weakness (she would know he has one given some of his soul wounds aren't still healed) and Voila : shiv's on a silver platter. He is Op but nowhere near invincible, i think it's deliberate on the author's part that shiv's has so many weaknesses, it's to provide good fights while patching them one at a time. I can think of a lot of other powers that counter shiv's, just a dimensional mage that's able to strech distance around him (like gojo's infinity in jjk) would be a hard counter. Then you have all the neceotechs that are his nemesis, mind power can incapacitate him and i'm sure there are a lot of power out there that can be a problem for him without being heroic or legendary.

Daniel McConville

I think the interesting part here is that Shiv realized how much the others were essentially stopping him dying. He hasn't been growing as much from death because they cover areas he is weak in. Now he is off by himself he is probably going to die a lot but grow rapidly from it. I think the fun part of this is interesting powers rather than who is the strongest. His mind/soul once actually dead are his biggest weakness still honestly.