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mark harrell

It's so crazy how Shiv basically had the exact same line of logic as the challengers monologue here a few chapters ago. The one about being more than just a brute. What a great antagonist(?) the Challenger is.

Rafnyd

Is the challenger partially inspired by khorne from 40k?

OstensibleMammal

Nah. He’s a mangled version of the Judge from Blood Meridian

Mark

Well, whatever the inspiration may be, you really refined the often somewhat dull orc stereotype towards something absolutely terrifying here: an endlessly respawning army of SMART, slaughter-crazed psychopaths.