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Veridescent

Hm given how fire mostly stops healing by effectively scarring tissue so cells can be transported I wonder how hard it would be most biomancers to simply slough off or move tissue to heal burns or actively put in materials with higher combustive points alongside already burnt tissue to shield organs and such. A good method for Shiv actually, he could combine those parts to rearrange them and remain functional. Good also for mitigating damage from inertial overload especially if he can use his gravitic wrestler to help focus the force on those zones. Would help him be much faster, especially if he could combine his vectorless skil to movd through the air(he did it for combustion no real reason he cant otherwhise or even has to use just a weapon for it).

Ved

Feel like Adam is being shown to be too fearful these last few chapters. The orcs have always unnerved him true, but he’s also a hero with a unique skill. He isn’t supposed to feel this nervous and scared any time he sees a random orc, there has to be some steel in him too. The chapter where he asked Shiv to help in cooking to compete with orcs seems so different than the Adam of now. When black edge was attacked Adam fought what was a hopeless battle. He seems so different now even though he’s only grown stronger. Idk, there has to be balance between Adam, Shiv and Uva for systems plan to work.

James Faulkner

This continues to be my favorite arc lol

James Faulkner

Can’t wait for Lone Star to try to recruit Shiv once they see him successfully lead 3 million orcs into battle against Sullain lmao. Pretty soon the Descenders, Lone Star, and maybe some Necrotech faction are going to try to poach him 😂

Weirwood

I think it is the compounding factors. Adam hasn't recovered from being kidnapped yet. It is all building up and he's just moving forward. His dead mom came back to life and now he's surrounded by thousand year old psychologist/diplomat/conmen/serial killers. He has no way to settle in himself.

123Quacker

I think Adam is being portrayed in a perfectly fine fashion. It's like they say, "Courage is resistance to fear, mastery of fear—not absence of fear." The problem here is that even if Adam is mastering that fear and continuing to be mostly functional through it, the orcs are still aware that he is afraid, which is what they care about.

Ved

Thats true to an extent but in Adam’s case his behaviour seems very different in just few chapters. From competing with Orcs in cooking to being afraid even in company of them. Adam is different from Uva and Shiv, but at the same time he’s supposed to be on same standing as them. Orcs at Master tier shouldn’t make him shudder so openly when he’s a hero…

Baged

This entire book series is worth recommending based solely on OM's portrayal of the orcs. They are so well-developed that, if they just had one common trait, they could become a meta orc race—on the same level as the Dark Elves IMO.

Ashen-Shugar

Ahh it's good comic relief,hell can't Every humie be a damn world crushing legend like his pops,come on guys,it makes Adam human,and maybe he's seeing how much readers like the character Adam arrow and where to go,I like,no I love this shit Mammal,mature stuff!