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OstensibleMammal

Editing next chapter. Time for a new phase of the story I call "opening up the sandbox." But before that, Shiv's in a bit of a pickle, and he's going to need to do something tricky to get out. Good thing he has an unredeemed Legendary Skill...

theoldestdream

Thanks for the chapter Farrwalkers? Uva remembered what those were. They were the ones ... Farrwalkers→Farwalker

Yoav

Feat Gained: Dreamer of the Black Gnosis - Allows the Pathbearer to sense, absorb, and dwell within spots of psychological madness. Absorbing madness will hypercharge the Pathbearer's Psychomancy and Eldritch Skills. Mammal, what is the rank of the feat?????!

Luis

As far as I remember Shiv has lv 1 portomancy/dimensional magic right? Seems like he is in a similar situation as back when he fought the recollector.

Yoav

Level 5 as far as the last time we saw it.

Emerson Fortier

Love it. I remember a writing professor of mine telling us once to "make your impossible situations more impossible" this might as well be the text book for it.: D

John Lim

This is getting extremely hard to follow. The length of this entire section since the tarrasque has been both exciting yet exhausting to the point where I can’t wait till we resolve this. I’m not sure how to feel about the world quest against shiv but it feels like every time down time is mentioned it’s become mocking and hard to believe. I guess I just want to express that if things don’t change soon I’ll become indifferent to the next big escalation it’s all just blending together. I miss the exploration and character development.

OstensibleMammal

I'm glad you said that. I've taken notes and feedback from readers about my constant and hyper escalation habits. Book 4 will be a little bit different on this front.

Yoav

The Stranger smiles upon you. The Stranger will not let you die so easily, Seeker. This should probably be the eldest rather then the stranger. Can't see The Stranger smiling on Uva. More like preying on her downfall.

Christian Lindholm

I’m over all enjoying the Tarrasque arc, but I also feel the story would benefit immensely of some quieter moments, bit more world/character building. The ever constant escalations are bound to get a bit stale. Thanks for the chapter!