Chapter 1 (Patreon)

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As promised, here is the full first chapter of my original story, co-written with my friend Heather Alexander.  Not the Heather from my videos - this is a completely different Heather.
Anyway, the book is called The Faal Stone (pronounced like FALL). No relation to The Sorcerer's Stone.   This story is going to be released chapter by chapter on NO set schedule.  This content will be Patron-Only on my website.  I am considering releasing the first chapter publicly so people can get an idea of what to expect before joining Patreon for the rest.  We also own the copyright on this work, so do not share, distribute, or attempt to sell.

Our plan is to eventually publish this book series, but it's not cheap, so hopefully we can get enough support to accomplish that.

This is a very early draft.  We've only gone through about 4 revisions.  

We always appreciate your impressions and constructive feedback!  Please leave a comment here and let us know what you think!

Read the first chapter here:
https://wizardryworkshop.com/faal-stone-chapter-i/