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avasdemon

no, i guess i should make that clearer some how? its just supposed to be a cut to what these two are doing while dialog is going

Cephalon Ghost

Im on mobile and cant fogure out how to reply on it: but i think maybe if Gil maybe had his eyes shut and face kinda scrunched since be’s still dwelling on what happened, right?

Doodles

Make sure the text is in narration boxes, not speech bubbles. Separates the speech from the scene.

avasdemon

I'm not sure I can do that because it might confuse people as to why they are boxes in the first place since I've never used them before :S People like to run away with small details and create whole theories around them, which I would like to avoid. PLUS Titan is the only character I would like to keep to square speech bubbles for story purposes, but if you have any other ideas I am open to them~