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How's the pacing? is this weird or fast? i just don't want to bloat this with unnecessary filler.

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MoMosa

Pacing is fine. But that cliffhanger reunion should be illegal! 😁

Will

*cliffhanger appears* Me: *deep breath* bitch.

Nak

I think the pacing is ok so far. If you had dragged the travel more, it would have felt annoying (my opinion of course) And the cliffhanger is devastating for my anxious heart

Scragon

Yeah! Travel is a little filler but i just can't jump from big points to more right away aughhh

Ralend

LOL I love Doug's Wizard Tower home. Please, dont change it.

Ralend

If you need help, you could always just let down your hair lol

Nathaniel S.

The suspense was perfect. I might be a bit of a masochist but I wouldn't have minded it being dragged out another episode if that's what you had decided, but this is also just *chef's kiss*

Scragon

XD thanks!!! I hate making thing too dramatic but i know it pays off sometimes!!!!

Hoyt

Love it. Total butterflies 🦋 ❤️

Mak

I LOVE THEM!!! Have I said that before? Probably. … I LOVE THEM!!!