Progress report! (Patreon)

So, the short book has been completed, but there are a few kinks and creases that need to be straightened out. Grammar mistakes, sentence restructure, etc, etc. There will be a poll on whether on not Lucas should be brought back and introduced in the third chapter or not. If the poll says yes, then he'll be introduced along with John (A Patreon romanceable gender-locked character) and Alex/Alice and they'll be supported by the GKM organization. If not then according to your choices, he'll either succumb to his injuries or something else entirely. The book is 26,500 words with 12,000 word play through.
synopsis:

After trying to recruit someone from Prison which fails badly for Vigil, he sends you and Blaine out. This is the first time you both are going out on a mission and have met only a few hours prior. Hayes’s loss has been devastating and every time you think of it, your skull feels as if it is splitting open. Hopefully, this mission will prove a good distraction and also show you what Blaine is like.