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MagisterdeVita

A very nice chapter. Enjoyed seeing Caitlin's perspective of things. Also glad to see some good old bi-panic permit. For a good bit there I thought you were going to make her completely straight, which would have been unfortunate. Also really enjoyed seeing Babbette be in her element as well.

Meudon

Edits meek out a living -> eke out a living was only she did so -> was only as she did so endless buildings that ran into each other without end -> a bit redundant otherworldly surrounding -> surroundings from seemed to be -> from what seemed to be center or not.” -> I'm not sure if you intended that to be a question or not do to resource limitations -> due to resource limitations

PublicLee Speaking

Yeah, Babette's normal tactics don't work on Jayce, so that can make her seem... weaker, than she actually is.

Dragonhulk

I would be right there with Jace saying that I have enough and not getting business, as it seems to be a basic business model that enough is never enough.