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Seeing With New Eyes

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Ramon Diaz

Excellent, one step closer to the reveal.

Mark

What great characterization of a very complex relationship.

GAMB42

As much as I dislike Blake's original character I am enjoying a lot how the narrative is developing her as a whole and where things seem to be headed. Mind you she is going to be gobsmacked when the reveal happens and its going to be extra funny because of that. I suppose the timer is finally going terminal when the empowerment becomes notable. It is one thing for the not!faunus to get slitted eyes but how exactly is is Weiss going to justify it ?

The GrandMage

At some point, Juancifer is going to reveal to her, and she's just going to go, "My mom is going to KILL me."

Devin

The day Jaune is forced to turn into a full dragon publically is going to have sooooo much "I told you so" payoff at this point that it's hilarious. Great work, Lee. As always.

Alice

I really love this story, you are using this IP to much greater payoff than the show.

Apeljohn

Might not be an issue. I figure there's another timer running in the background for when they get empowered enough that minor shapeshifting just comes with the package. Due to the dragon-adjacent nature of kitties, Blake got unlucky as to which landed first.

Apeljohn

Welp, this Blake is definitely shaping up as a possible harem member. (And a much better person than the canon Blake.) Pyrrha must be feeling quietly smug.

GAMB42

Frankly that all gets summed into the main point of empowerment. For better or worse this is a scenario where once the team cross the Person of Mass Destruction limit their personal characteristics won't matter anymore.

daniel koval

Ok that was an amazing chapter, you just completely salvaged Blake character arc! We got to see her thoughts and see how alien Jaune can be from someone else’s eyes. I really look forward to seeing more of this and seeing his team and his friends interact. Looking forward to seeing them act as his council and work to understand him while retaining some of their ties to humanity while Jaune has little to none at this point. Very very well done!