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Settling in: Parole

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Meudon

Edits fourth day afterward the -> after and they flames -> the

Mr Mouse

The “Of course I am,” at the end, seems to be in answer to “Would I have your help?” and seems off as a result Either way, thanks for the chapter, delightful as always to see the thickheadedness that makes Aang such a good earthbender, and the clues Denki is managing to both pick up, and to drop

Dragonhulk

Sokka remains my favorite male Avatar character. Loved how you showed that even if he has the education typical of a hunter/gatherer civilization he still came up with a damn good plan for dealing with Denki. All he was missing was that final critical step. Too bad he didn't have the people smarts to convince the Avatar that some people just need killing. Also I love the talk Denki had with Zuko, and the final decision to interfere with the first spirit journey episode.