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Northward Bound: Storm Dancing

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Vrenze

?? I thought the queue had 2 more Naruto chapters before anything else?

PublicLee Speaking

No, I did 2 kommissioned chapters, then a standard rotation, and making sure to get at least 2 C&C chapters a month to get the book done.

Vrenze

Ah! My bad. I hope you have a great weekend!

Tony Martin

I don't remember, what is the Blue Mask?

Rylando

Zuko has a blue oni mask and a pair of swords that he uses to go ninja from time to time.

Meudon

Edit working a sore muscles. -> muscle

Alice

Great chapter, still can't wait for Momo to fully join the avatar fun

The GrandMage

Honestly? Since it's his Blue Spirit guise, I think it'd be funny to go all out on being Spirits, "Wan Shi Tong informs you that the price for burning his Library is to be cursed to Failure." Then spirit Aang away into nothingness.

Nate

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Skyfir

Dang this chapter was great and had my brain going off on some tangents. It started with me thinking that the gift from the storm spirit might let them dance up a literal storm as it is theoretically possible even if outside the norm and spirits have been known to expand bending powers beyond what is standard. Then my brain was off thinking when that would be relevant and was like hay that would be a great way to deal with the siege of the North Pole. But they probably wouldn’t be able to call up a storm big enough to sink that many ships with just the two of them. By the end my brain had conjured up a scene where they have managed to create a storm but it is not nearly enough and in their efforts to strengthen it they end up with a much more aggressive and sexually charged version ( definitely inspired by that description of the lightning half of that dance being more of a stalking motion) to get a more violent storm. At that point I realized my brain had gone off way too much on that chapter which is usually an indication it was pretty dang good.

Dragonhulk

I can just imagine the storm spirit looking at the cute couple of souls and going "Aww, look and the widdle baby spirits. Here, have some candy for trying so hard."