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Technically, at 4.7k words, this is long enough to be a kommission on its own (even though, realistically, I'd include the next scene as well), but because I want to get through all of Iron Man 2, this is part 1 of 3.

Previous chapters found HERE.

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Dragonhulk

Well, I can't say how happy I am that this was just part 1 of 3. I'm not sure I could contain my nerd rage if I had to wait six months for the next part. Seriously though, adding witch hunters to Iron Man 2 to go after Karma and Tony, that is an interesting twist, and I wonder how you will fit them in along with the rest of the movie in just two more parts. This remains my fave story, not just because of the IP used, but because we haven't seen one POV from the SI. Having what looks to be an entire story of characters reacting to an SI and seeing things completely from an outside point of view isn't something I've seen in the genre before.

SoraWolf7

Awww, that's that GOOD SHIT! I love that Ivanko managed to pick up what he did, and likely due to his upbringing, knew what was there and what he had to do. He is a smart man. Vengefully driven and an asshole, but a smart man regardless.

Meudon

Edits consider how great he was -> considering sense of ‘I’ve got it and you don’t, -> don't,' while it had heard to hear -> had been hard to

Mr Mouse

Really cool to see Vanko reaching out, can't wait for our boy to hang with Tony, maybe get some lab time in and really juice his Science and Engineering; TFTC

cybersonicyoash

So instead of just Ironman and Warmachine vs Whiplash and Hammer, now the fight will include Karma and Crimson Dynamo. Interesting.