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Tyric Gaias

Will Lee ever not deal with assholes?

SoraWolf7

Mel is just grating on my nerves at this point. She is everything Lee says she is and WORSE, if only because she has her head so far up her butt that she's practically letting out farts each time she opens her mouth.

Seto Kyba

I wish I had half your talents in writing...

Seto Kyba

The MHA cast has grown on me also.

Tyric Gaias

Can’t read that one. The hooking up with his cousin turned me off it.

Rapthorn2ndform

I'm enjoying this. Time loops are had for me to get invested but having multiple characters AND the villain all be aware makes it interesting. One thing I do not understand at all is 'Cultivation' but that isn't your responsibility to hand hold me through and your explanations are to the point that I still follow the story even if I miss some of the nuances.

Meudon

Edits and Mal nor Simon -> and neither didn’t take cover, along -> cover along

Tyric Gaias

Just be careful of deals from a certain “Company”….

Goron201

Possible edit From I let her for a couple minutes, before, seeing some of the locals heading over, I murmured, “Got to go,” patted her on the arm, and gently peeled her off, To I let her CLING/'STAY LIKE THAT' for a couple minutes, before, seeing some of the locals heading over, I murmured, “Got to go,” patted her on the arm, and gently peeled her off,