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Shattered Bastions 1-10 (Patreon)

Published:
2026-05-17 18:24:18
Edited:
2026-07-20 04:24:02
Imported:
2026-05
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Brandon

thanks for the chapter. man the girlfriend is givin a little selfish and self centered vibes no gonna lie

Meudon

Edits which the Scouts moved so fast they overlooked -> Scouts overlooked because they moved so fast (original kinda works, but can be read to say that the scouts are moving the plants) levelling -> leveling jumping down and taking off at a jog -> jumped down and took off none weren’t anything -> none were

Arkos Sloth

Alright, so I am guessing that Kyle and Anna had a thing at one point. She was stringing both boys along before making a decision. Hell, she may even have some sort of succubus-like job. Dylan's level of self-control for his age is frankly almost unbelievable. But it is interesting to see how his job's instincts are influencing him. It's like the job intuits something that he is denying on a conscious level. Maybe this lesson will teach to apply his self-control to other areas of his life.

Dragonhulk

Okay, I'm really hoping that you're playing Dylan as a slightly oblivious nice guy. Right now I'm getting some of the same vibes that I get when reading your other SI characters. You do that so much to make money writing fanfiction that there may be some bleed through. I hope that Dylan will be an OC MC with some of your traits but not a lot, that way he can still provide a unique view of the situation but not going over the same ground you have in your other stories. You're a great writer, and you plan to put this in bookstores, so I know you can take the MC of this story in a direction you haven't with the other stories you have written.

PublicLee Speaking

Yes, that is exactly what I'm doing. He's the audience surrogate, with enough obliviousness so that most will get the dramatic irony that's harder to cultivate in single PoV stories, but he's also better with people than I normally am, while having some analysis, but the discovery/media application aspect of things is more Malik. Dylan's got that golden retriever energy, essentially. Kinda like Newbie from Born to Ken, minus the social awareness. There's gonna be some stylistic bleed through, but if you look at my multi PoV fics, that's a running theme even as characters have vastly different internal voices.

Vysirez

Dylan apologizing for getting punched is going beyond nice guy into caricature territory. Yes, people always have motivations for what they do, but that doesn't mean those motivations are valid or realistic or even not completely selfish. Not making a fuss about the sucker punch is being a nice guy. Apologizing to someone sucker punching you is messed up doormat behavior.