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A Chat of Ice and Fire

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Templar9999

Ella is waking up after a long, long time. Well done.

Michael Friede

That was very good. He’s actually going to flip her, not quite yet, but hes gonna

Turnandrun

Honestly, I'd say he has just flipped her. There's a large amount of "de-eviling" that needs to be done, but I think she's leaning more towards him than the non-answering Salem.

Meudon

Edits You does your -> Your that wasn’t there. -> there? Against arguable -> arguably wise, Jaune,” Pyrrha questioned. -> Jaune?" there were all closer -> they were

Tony Martin

He just finished flipping her. He just flipped her to himself and not Oz.

Dragonhulk

A very nice chapter, and a good reminder that sometimes you need to go after the people that created the monster.

cybersonicyoash

>>“Behemoths are awakening across the world,” I replied. “A White Fang possibly splinter faction hit Vale with the worst attack in decades, and used Grimm to do it. We have Atlesian battleships hanging overhead. The eyes of the world are on us. If someone wants to send a message, now is the time to do it. If nothing happens, awesome, but if Salem was gonna pull something, now is the time to do it.” “Salem?” Blake scoffed. “Jaune, she’s not real.”<< Did I miss or forget something? I expected Blake to ask who Salem was, not act as if Salem was known as a myth or something. Pretty sure her actual name is just outright unknown publicly instead of dismissed as myth. Unless it's been so long since I read it that I forgot it being mentioned in story. Is that the case?

MagisterdeVita

Careful Lee, you're going to have people from the vore community come out if you start talking about eating people 😂. Awesome chapter though really enjoyed the walls coming down with Weiss. Really looking forward to them coming down what's the rest of the crew as well. The story and your mha story has it going on for years. So seeing the character progression with them actually reaching out to and fully (mostly) embracing those in their inner circle is worthwhile to see on the horizon. The Cinder section was also really good. Cool to see your MC seeing the Fuller picture I'll send her and not just looking at her like she's capital E-vil . Also some insight into the flags that you were putting up in the last chapter with our dear Grimm Queen. Here's hoping that Oz got something out of that conversation as well and not just keep his head in the sand.

cybersonicyoash

Also, didn't Jaune know Cinder's former slave backstory due to the news article Vale posted to show 'how bad other nations are while we're the best, trust', or did it not go into detail and this is him finding out the specifics?

PublicLee Speaking

1. Salem, Queen of the Grimm, is a known 'Myth', which Blake, being the most well read, has heard of. 2. He made a cinder-ella joke, which hit hard, and he rolled with, Oz did research to find the Glass Unicorn being burnt the fuck down (which you can assume he passed on to Jauncifer), but the ridiculously horrible specifics, like not even being an evil step-mother, just a slave owner, and the electrocution torture, were new to him.