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Hymn(And with that, book 1 is done! We'll do book 2, then put it on hiatus while I do ACE book 3)

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Retexks

Thanks for the Chapter

Mr Mouse

Great chapter, makes sense as a cutoff point, even if it felt quite short for one of your books (~86K, I think, so regular novel length) Tho' as always I'm torn between loving this, especially the 'No More' we had this chapter, and being extremely eager to get back to ACE

PublicLee Speaking

Yeah, it's on the slightly lower end for a BL novel, but definitely in the range. Also, I actually planned the entire series out before I started, so it's the end of Book 1... Of 18.

Mr Mouse

Oh no, my lobster is too buttery, and my steak is too juicy :P

Meudon

Edits Heroic Capability bolster -> bolstering anyone is directly holding so a pointed gun -> holding is difficult so

MagisterdeVita

Awesome chapter Lee, was a big fan of the conversion section in the descriptions that occurred in it. Interested in seeing the ripple effects in the crew from this particular miracle. Since it seems that he's already forming a small cult with the administrative and the sisters (even though it's quite obvious he doesn't understand how deeply it's going). By chance, which stories are getting updated next. Are you going back to bastion or continuing the commission stories?

Tony Martin

I love all the casual mentions of having regular and casual conversations with various Primarchs. The Inquisitor and the rest are looking so hard for holes in his story, that each time he mentions them without thinking it must break their brain.

Dragonhulk

Yeah, I think the QQ people will love that. Though I have to say I'm happy to hear you have this planned. In the past you've just let your fanfiction grow organically for the most part. While the world building and character development are always great knowing where a good stopping point is helps us readers not read all through the night.

PublicLee Speaking

3 chapters of Bastion, another Main Rotation, then it'll be time for Komissions.

TooLazyToLogin

Loved the description of the new Choir room. Thanks for the chapter! “I can also, with my Gifts, affect Technology, though, for a whole bunch of very complicated reasons, doing so to anything anyone is directly holding so a pointed gun is a threat, but, if I’m aware of it, a thrown grenade is merely a very expensive paperweight." Think this section is missing a bit where he's describing that he can't affect things people are holding. "Doing so to anything someone is directly holding (can't be done, is impossible), so a pointed gun is still a threat".

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Is it weird I’m expecting him to run into Constantin somewhere ?