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Part 2 of 2, next up, THREAD!

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El Lando

I'm very happy with what we got here. Soul and martial talent being ridiculous in this setting, trolling the blueberry of questionable morality, and building a bond with the (former) level up lady.

Lillow Lynx

Yeah the interactions with Ranni and Melly were great, really enjoyed the philosophical aspects of the discussion with both of them. Also enjoying the food/cooking thing it’s a really neat detail of your writing that naturally stands out a lot more in a world like Elden Ring. Have a few more comedic comments but I’ll save those for QQ where I can quote the writing. :)

Adam Daw

It's great. This is really good stuff. Thanks for the chapters.

Meudon

Edits so stowed that too -> so I stowed fucking meaning, but because they were -> meaning, were (to connect with the beginning "Thankfully") fire, keeping Torrent -> fire, so I was keeping (to adapt to the previous edit) which was more like -> which made it more gleefully rip me limb for -> limb from limb like Torrents -> Torrent's claws int -> into Who was I to say no. -> no? Gideon Ofnir, a most -> Ofnir, was a digestive track, -> tract other gods before,” -> before?

MagisterdeVita

Aye, a random 'The Wiz' reference popping up in fanfiction? I see that you are a man of culture Leecifer! Great chapter but regrettable because now I want more. But, it's not likely to get updated at for at least 3 years or so, lol's. Are you going to be doing another palooza for the months of November or will we be returning back to normal schedule after thread?

Lillow Lynx

He’s confirmed elsewhere that he’s doing another commission-palooza.

Dragonhulk

Not an update I've been waiting at the edge of my seat for, but still very nice. Though you may need to find someplace to post other than QQ if their bug resolution takes as long as AO3.