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Zachary Brown

Huh, Hiemerdoof really stepping back and mellowing out, relatively speaking. With Jaycifer directing development in this way its likely that the floof will be less obstructive then in cannon, as long as nothing like that hexcore mutating plants doenst trigger him again.

Alice

Head of the Piltover Council as having a good day. Missed a 'w' in was

Alice

Really cool chapter looking forward to seeing what you do with the world in book 2 now that you have completely derailed canon for piltover and probably Zaun also

Zerak

Is this the end point of the Arc? I last read the part where they ran from the rat people and wanted to wait till the Arc fished and binge it.

Rosenheim

Nice end of Act 1. I'd have to reread it all to be sure, but it def felt like the Under-UnderCity overstayed its welcome as it was coming out, even if it served its purpose in getting Vi and Jaycifer to have a good relationship. Still, I enjoyed seeing a lot of the changes and will be interested to see where you take this going forward.

PublicLee Speaking

It being kind of long was intentional, though it was about far more than repairing Vi and Jaycifer's relationship.

Zerak

2 months late, but I finally read the last 8 chapters I was holding off on. Liked the ending a lot. Specially since it showed that the Dean is willing to change his mind (even if he is somewhat up his own ass). Too often you see authors turn a criticism of a character into a bashing fic. Having read a decent chunk of the escape from the under under city and the conclusion at the end on the history of the what had happened also allows you to see the perspective the Dean and why he takes such a hardline approach. It’s refreshing to read a story where everyone has motives and they act based on them instead of having 2D personalities with no depth.