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MHA 105 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-06-13 01:00:01
Edited:
2023-09-13 17:28:44
Imported:
2026-06
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Black Dog of Misfortune.

Comments

Zerak

At the start of the chapter you say semblance a few times instead of quirk.

David Hedges

If you hadn't said in the comments of your worm story that you were done writing grimderp in your stories I would have dropped this story right here, but since you have promised that I'll trust you to follow through on what you were saying. It is annoying that I am gonna probably have to wait a few months for this whole situation in the story to be over though. Having week or month long cliffhangers is both annoying and kills the suspense, but writing speed isn't really something I expect you to increase or anything. This whole post is just me venting my frustration at the general situation.

PublicLee Speaking

Understandable. There's ~ 3-4 chapters in the 'Captured' Arc, and then we're jumping ship to another dimension.

PublicLee Speaking

... it's the problem with writing two different superhero battle school anime at the same time, and the mood here was hitting RWBY levels. Fixed now.

zzzomegazzz

Well shit. This is not good. Welp anxiety continues to rise a la discontent from frostpunk. Look forward to the conclusion of this cluster fuck and the reactions. Hope Denki opens up to the survivors and just takes more people along for training to capitalize in the dimensional shenanigans. They will need it.

Zerak

Makes sense. He would need to lay low. Though from the looks of it he would go alone. I thought he would initially bring others with him (which he still might if he escapes before he jumps ship). BTW how does the portal to other worlds work when he comes back? Does he come back to the same location he left?

bfoolforty

Ugh, this whole arc has been overly long and annoying to read through. I just hope there something better on the other side to justify it, but I'm not optimistic. It sucks, because I've really enjoyed this story up until this last arc, which has killed my enthusiasm for it.

MagisterdeVita

Yeah, sorry to jump on the complaining train. But, I have not been a fan of this arc let alone the training Arc. I really do enjoy the story but when it hits the station of the Cross moments and then expands upon them and definitely you're really kills one motivation to read. And now we have our MC being captured and have the dose of ramification of all that. I missed the fluffy slice of light moments with Mina, building zany and fun inventions with Mei and flustering and confusing the adorkable Momo. These heaps and heaps of split point of views, long stretch of the same training missions and now the heaps of character death.... Are just... A lot.

daniel koval

Interesting chapter, I liked the charecterization that the different people are getting, everyone feel alive, like they are growing as people. Great job! Also great job on showing is a villain that actually has a point, don’t get me wrong he is messed up and I would place good money on AfO setting everything up. On the other hand he isn’t wrong about how corrupt and messed up the current system is. Especially if he helped set it up, seeing how corrupted it is now would be a nasty gut check. Now he is going about trying to “fix” it in the worst way possible but at least you have us an interesting viewpoint! Now as for the capture part, I’m not sure how I feel. Initially I find it contrived and kind of plot baity, but I will reserve my judgment until we get another chapter or two. It feels kinda of contrived that Toga of all people got some of Mina’s blood and managed to bait Denki that easily but it looks like there was something almost, influencing(?), Denki. Either way I hope the wait for the next chapter isn’t as long as this one was. I like a good cliff hanger every once in a while but your using them a bit much this arc.

Dragonhulk

"but it was clear the extreme Heteromorph who ran the institution was used to modern rules, and had not realized how compromised the system he served truly was." Well this could mean computer systems my bet is on some of the pro Heroes turning traitor. I also liked the trap with Toga. I saw coming because I knew it was too much to Butterfly her way but I think that even if the main character remembered her and her powers he wouldn't have acted any differently. The possibility of AfO targeting Pinky is just too real to discount, and in a situation where fractions of a second count there was no other option but to act.

Dragonhulk

Well we just finished what I'm calling the slaughter arc, and Lee has said that we are going to jump worlds in another three to four chapters.

JohnJohn2195

Give it up for mineta! 👏👏👏 little man stepped up and showed what a hero he is.

Zerak

Indeed, though I feel bad for the little guy. He finally got a girl that was showing interest and she got chopped up.

Magus-4-Hire

The Camp is the reason i dropped $10 for this.

Zerak

So a thought occurs to me, in the version of the WC that is used for this story the pocket dimension comes with workshops for anything you know how to make. Danki is the one with the most exposure to high tech stuff and how to make them due to the support equipment stuff. Jace is the smartest from the start but he was not given access to knowledge (outside of what he personally knows or picked up in basic) so he can innovate. Which means when Danki gets access to his pocket dimension he can fuck shit up with massive explosives. Or just use thermite to melt the cage and walk out. And he can avoid the explosion by entering his portal. I can’t remember if he would have access to his phone inside the home since he would be able to use that to call for help, also not sure if he has enough knowhow to make an anti-signal jammer.

Prospero

Love it, and the reminder that quirk Satan is both experienced and Good at what he does is likely a sobering one for everyone involved.