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Three Years Later.

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Rosenheim

Woo! My favorite story. (Ekko should probably be referred to as just dark-skinned or Black, rather than "African-American", due to the lack of... ya know Africa or America in the setting.)

PublicLee Speaking

Yeah, I realized that afterwards. I've updated the attached file with that fixed, along with some other minor clarifications. That said, nothing materially has changed about it.

MagisterdeVita

Soooo, for some reason when I click the attachment it comes up as attachment not found. Not sure what's going on there.

PublicLee Speaking

Try it again? You might've clicked it in the couple minutes I was re-uploading it. If not, please tell me and I'll try and see what I can do.

MagisterdeVita

That did it, thanks. It was a fun read with all the techno babble and all and I highly enjoy reading the interaction between the four techies and their strengths and weaknesses. I'm excited to see how VI and Caitlin have come along as well. Are they still rivals or have they broached into the territory of frenemies. Or seeing as how they are basically a Canon couple, has a bit of Sparks of romance come up. Also interested to see what's going on in the under City. I imagine some of the tech of the day found underground is being implemented. Can't wait for more.

Zerak

Gota love those ingrained societal niceties.

Zerak

Nice intro to book 2, but I think you went over past events too much introducing everyone again (if briefly).