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MHA 111 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-11-24 03:04:15
Edited:
2024-01-19 03:50:20
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2026-06
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Taking the JumpAt mass request, here's the next chapter of MHA!Also Happy Thanksgiving!Also^2 I've finally moved into my new apartment, so updates should be a lot more frequent!Thank you for your patience, and let's get back to these stories!

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Dragonhulk

Thank you for being flexible and not making us wait an entire month for the next part of the story. Also I'm glad to hear that you have settled in.

Streetwise

Yay! onwards and upwards for the best pair!

El Lando

Thank you so much for the extra chapter! I hope dencifer gets better.

fireball77

Thanks for the chapter! Although this may be where I drop this story, because I've never really been into star wars

daniel koval

Great chapter, I am already looking forward to more! It will be very very interesting to see the changes to cannon and to see the person from SW that worms their way into Denki and Mina’s heart. Also congrats on the new apartment, glad that got taken care of.

RandomAsian

Could always comeback after this arc is complete.

fireball77

That might take another 111 chapters for all I know

Phant0m5

Aww. I was hoping the YaoMomo could have been romanced before Denki moved on from the world.

PublicLee Speaking

Stick around for a couple more, just in case. Who knows, I might surprise you.

MagisterdeVita

Wooo boy, what's the way he's feeling right now the force might do a number to him. Also depending on when in Star wars he goes but also depends on how prevalent the dark side is which could be quite tainting. I know it's a long shot but it'd be really interesting if he went to the KOTOR part of Star wars rather than the movie trilogies or animation. Seeing him deal with the likes of Revan and Malik, hanging around the ebon hawk and maybe picking up mission as a girlfriend. Or hell going into the sequel with the MC was able to walk through his companions and the steps of becoming a force user. Be a bit more bombastic than just the wrong stretches that happened in the movies. Regardless, good read. Just wish we could have got the fallout from the adults perspective. Saying and meeting with from Aizawa's or one of the other pros would have been quite the experience.

Tai Parry

Kinda surprised the whole Momo thing didn't get resolved one way or the other. Not gonna lie, that's kinda unsatisfying, I hope you have plans to do something with that thread down the line or it's gonna make all the buildup she got feel like a waste of time.

Zerak

Still did not explain the hospital thing, like why no one from school or parents were keeping an eye on him. But more importantly the way things are now it leaves things hanging, all that buildup with Momo only to drop it (and please please don’t have her just be in the suitcase). The same for Mai, leaving her behind after everything they have been through and go to a technologically advanced world like Star Wars would be to her like a punch in the gut. Like imagine the person you spent a decent part of each day with alone with just your thoughts and wild ideas one day just decides to up and leave without even the decency to say “by your leave” or even just meeting up after 10 days of being MIA. I am excited about Star Wars, but the things as they are now feel even less satisfying than the ending of last chapter. I hope this doesn’t come off someone bitching the story isn’t going the way they want, I am just trying to give some constructive criticism. On a side note I highly doubt Jiro did as told, she likely listened in and has way more questions than before. Edit: I guess Danki could have done some stuff stuff during those 2 days, and maybe you are leaving them as a surprise, but it definitely feels like that lowered the quality rather than increase anticipation. Because unlike the enthusiasm I usually feel with an upcoming big event in one of your stories all I feel is hope that things will be explained in a satisfactory way rather than a downward spiral of more unexplained things. Because that’s what the previous chapter was like, and this chapter did not illuminate any of the issues in it. Tl;dr: I don’t know what the emotional response you were going for, but I don’t think it’s what you got, unless it’s a mix of unsatisfactory and empty. I definitely felt more happy about the new chapter coming out than I did after reading it. Edit 2: Fuck this website is annoying to using on phone to comment. I am glad you found a new apartment, looking for a new place then arranging for movers (or doing it yourself) and making sure everything runs smoothly (or as smooth as possible) can be very mentally draining. So despite the criticism, thanks for the chapter :)

TheTinyGrayDog

Yes! We are finally traveling through the multiverse! Congrats on hitting this milestone Lee, I've been reading your star wars fic and I'm looking forward to seeing your previous (and possibly refined) concepts here

Turncoat

It's certainly a bit more abrupt than I would have expected, but I recognize that Lee is fundamentally someone tied up in his own trauma and emotions. Most Shonen settings I think would require a certain kind of chimpanzee to be wholeheartedly thrilled for the absolute balls to the wall danger, heartbreak, and heartache, that comes with them. In comparison, depending on what time period of Star Wars they're dropping into, it's decidedly more innocent and not nearly as dangerous. Provided you don't get sniped in a ship, Quirks are such out of context bullshit for your average person that they wouldn't have the faintest clue what to do about them.

Joel Morgan-Bullock

Very nice, I'm excited to see how he interacts with Jedi beliefs and your take on how to force affects and interacts with people! Hope his rest and recovery heals his soul quickly! Maybe find an alien therapist?

DragonShark-Eater

Awww, I was hoping that Momo and Mei, would also go with him. Anyways, good chapter as always Lee, also Happy Thanksgivings and that everything goes well in your new apartment!

MagisterdeVita

If he comes in during the sequel they can hop aboard the Evan hawk was the MC of that game. There is barely any Jedi around it due to the most recent Purge so the main character begins teaching anyone on his ship whose four sensitive how to be a Jedi or Sith depending on their leanings. Plus there's even more potential people that the two of them could hook up with on that particular companion crew.