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ACE 2-08 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-01-29 10:19:20
Edited:
2024-04-05 04:55:50
Imported:
2026-06
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Back-Alley Brawl

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Mr Mouse

Loved the chapter, can't wait to see how Jayce is gonna deal with his Legend "It made the kinds of acrobatics that Piper liked to pull off on the regular", makes them what? Out of curiosity, of topic, where does this put us on the cycle? There's a couple of MGs I'm really looking forward to, not that the mainline stories aren't great

Jokarun

Now he'll have to think back to his seminars of 'so you have inspired a cult, what now?' Poor jayce

daniel koval

I love how this has progressed, I wasn’t a fan at first but this one has really grown on me. I love the gunsmith and NotWitcher segments. Hope to see Jace start to use the chems as useful mutagens, tailored to himself or to his companions. Grow bone weave, or tendion reinforcements. Well you said he wasn’t good at the biology side some maybe one of his friends has to dose him to save his life? Also I wonder what effects the faith will have on him, proto cult go!

Acrimonius

The chapter could use a little editing. Too many run-on sentences that make parsing thoughts and actions difficult.

PublicLee Speaking

'on the regular more difficult' is what it should read, and it's been fixed. Next up are chapter 2's for Waifulution and the WCU.

Meudon

Edits well come to you -> we'll flying down him -> on him On the regular -> regular difficult Anyodd -> any odd Half-sung -> half-sunk Which shown with -> shone Small ship -> chip

Dragonhulk

Best line in the chapter "…I was starting to think that flying down him garbed as a Spirit of Justice, trying to shoot him, and declaring him my Enemy might have made the man… paranoid." I laughed so hard that something went down the wrong tube and I started to choke/ cough while still laughing.